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You will write five paragraph discussing (one intro, three bodies, and one conclusion). Body paragraphs should have three paragraphs: loyalty in ANTIGONE and loyalty in DEATH OF A SALESMAN. The third supporting paragraph will be your experience or the experience of someone whom you know loyalty.

DO NOT USE AN OUTSIDE SOURCE. THAT WILL BE PLAGIARSM.

* I already choose theme, made thesis, and wrote topic sentences. You just need to add more stories to my topic sentences. Topic sentences have to be the first sentence of each body paragraphs (I just need 3 body paragraphs not anymore). And thesis should be on the last sentence of the intro.

*It must be double-spaced and more than 3 pages (she said more than 60 lines). My professor really strict about it. So please care about it.

Theme: Loyalty

Thesis: Antigone died because of her non-negotiable loyalty; Biff took his loyalty away from Willy, and I finished military service in Korea because of loyalty.

Topic sentence 1: Antigone died because she disobeyed Creon because of loyalty to his father.

Topic sentence 2: When Biff realized his father’s unfaithfulness, he hurt his heart so hardly because of loyalty to his father.

Topic sentence 3: I have strong loyalty to my country, so I went to army and spent two years to protect my nation.