who is ready to write my final draft ? one page essay

Hello..,,

I have posted my first draft of my profile essay and it has my professor comments, so could you please review my professor comment and rewrite the final draft of that essay? Here is the assignment direction:-

Important things that should include in this essay:-

- Creative title.

- A HOOK at the begging of the introduction sentence.

- I need you to use Clear and logical transitions between the introduction, body, and conclusion.

-This essay is spouse to be one page essay

Here is the assignment direction:-

  You will then write an essay about your partner’s experience of diverse communication.  Take very thorough notes as taught in class.  The focus of the interview is best practices of managing cultural differences in communication styles as experienced by the interviewee, your partner.   You are required to have the following sections in your Essay # 1: Profile, based on and adapted from the first section of “Outlining Your Draft” on page 95 of Axelrod & Cooper: I. Introduction to your topic (the interviewee & her/his experience of best practices of managing cultural differences in communication styles in his profession)—Include a hook, thesis statement, and statement of main ideas for this paper in your introduction as taught in this course. II. Discuss the main points of the interviewee in terms of best practices of managing cultural differences in communication styles in her/his life experiences.  III. Discuss how the interviewee’s life experiences inform her/his communication style? IV. Fill in information wherever you can, and comment about the interviewee and what she/he knows about the given topic. V. To conclude, have a restatement of the main ideas and also conclude with reflections on what you have learned about your interviewee and her/his communication style in her/his life experiences.   make sure that you begin each paragraph with a transitional idea comparing the similarities and/or differences of the main idea of the previous paragraph to the main idea of the new paragraph. Lastly, please be sure to enjoy your learning through this process.