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1. Who am I, and why am I here?

I am Zhan, an international student whose major is Finance, and this is my third year at CSUN, the reason why I am here is likely as others, getting a well-paid job and pursuing my goal, but right now the most important goal would be the graduation. And I know, in order to achieve this current goal, I have to hone my skills and get myself ready and competitive for the future, that is my mission statement.

2. Who do I want to be in the future … in 5 years… in 10 years?

I want to be a successful and experienced entrepreneur with perspicacious insight as Peter Thiel, a CEO and co-founder of PayPal with Max Levchin and Elon Musk. Because I enjoy seeing something particularly that others can’t see, it is like polishing the raw jade.

3. What did I dream of becoming?

I used to dream of becoming a basketball player on account of influenced by my father, and I am obsessed with this sport. However, due to physical reason, I would never have a professional career. As for now, being a manager of a basketball franchise is more likely fulfilled.

4. What do I value that gives real happiness?

5. What am I passionate about that gives meaning to life?

Belonging, hope, reliability and understanding

I think the real happiness is being needed, people count on you and that makes you different and meaningful. It is feeling great to be an accepted part of a group, a team or a community, the feeling of belongingness is the human emotional need, just like the need for food, and the feeling is one of most important value in my life as well as understanding, hope and reliability. All of values could narrow down on one word, contribution. When I contribute or do something for my tam, I feel proud of myself, because the belongingness drives me to do it for my team. Even though sometimes I failed to them, they tried to understand me instead of blaming on me. The hope motivates me to improve myself, getting better day by day, because I know they rely on me, I don’t want to let them down. All values drive me to become a better contributor in the future.

6. What things do I really enjoy doing?

I really enjoy communicating with people, because each time I talk to somebody, I always could learn something from them. I consider communication is like exchange of information or resource sharing. Nobody has the same experiences, each of us is unique and individual, and we have been through plenty of situations that others never have, so we could see problems in variety of perspectives by people who conduct different things whenever the communication occurs.

7. What is important to me in life, both personally and professionally?

The most important thing to me is motivation in both personal and professional life. Motivation is general need or desire of someone to do something. No matter what we do, we have to love what we do, this is the secret to push you to success, otherwise you will lack of passion and you are inefficient, maybe it could turn out an even worse outcome. For instance, the vibe you provide is inactive, your teammate or college may get influenced by your passive mood and their efficiency decline as well.

8. What am I doing when I feel my best?

I feel my best it the time when I work with my teammate and being such an inevitable part of my team. I am willing to embody my value to my team as a contributor.

9. What is it that I believe so strongly in that I would be willing to die for?

When my family or teammate who really count on me, I would be willing to die for not failing them.

10. What are my strengths and weaknesses? What skills do I have?

Strengths: I am kind and I like to communicate with people, also I am nice co-worker in group, I always contribute myself. And I am eager to learn and try to enhance my skills day by day.

Weaknesses: Due to the language barrier, sometimes I might not be able to express myself directly and clearly, but I am working on it. My currently vision statement will be improve my oral skill and be able to speak in public. Also I am a good time management person, a good listener and mediator. It would be nice to having me in workplaces.

11. With regard to money, how much is enough? If I have more, what will the excess be used for?

12. I can’t tell the exactly amount of money that will meet my “enough” standard, but for me, I think that I could pay off all debt and still have money to do what I want. If I have more, I would invest anything that I am interest in.

13. What do you want to contribute?

I love to contribute, so as long as the group or my family need me, I will contribute all I have, time, money and knowledge.

14. What do I want to be remembered for?

I want to be remembered for an excellent team-worker or contributor. As what I said above, that is the value I want to embody.

Strengths · A good listener and co-worker · Familiar with Excel · Time Management · Good at researching	Opportunities · University Education · Alumni · Social Network- LinkedIn · Family business
Weaknesses · Language Fluency · Lack of creativity · Writing Accuracy · Lack of experiences	Threats · Fear of Failure · Not a good team leader · Lack of money · Strong competition