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Gold Guide to Academic Quality 18 January 2011
Introduction
Good communication skills are critical to success. They help you to achieve good grades at university
and are highly valued by employers. This guide provides you with general information about academic
requirements for high quality communication. However, please note that some courses have special
requirements and you should always follow the instructions in the course outline.
Important Note: The Learning Support group at the University offers all students free help with
academic skills. They provide workshops, an excellent website with many resources, and individual and
confidential help. See: http://www.newcastle.edu.au/unit/ctl/lsp
This gold guide is a very brief summary of some academic skills. It gives provides you with useful web
addresses from our online teaching and library resources. The library website has a great deal of useful
information and many excellent online tutorials. You can access them via:
University of Newcastle>Library>Training>Online Tutorials…..
1 Criteria for grades
The meaning of each grade (High distinction, Distinction, etc) is outlined in University of Newcastle
policy at: http://www.newcastle.edu.au/policylibrary/000649.html
Some courses provide more information to explain how the criteria are specifically interpreted.
2 The basics of academic writing and critical thinking
Basic skills
The University of Newcastle InfoSkills modules provide an overview of all the basic activities involved
in planning, researching, and writing academic work. The modules are available at
www.newcastle.edu.au/services/library/tutorials/infoskills/
The five modules provide excellent information with respect to academic skills:
1. Planning 2. Finding information (using the Library) 3. Evaluating information (writing critiques) 4. Writing and plagiarism 5. Using information ethically
Module 4 includes links on strategies for good practice in writing. These strategies include effective
notetaking, paraphrasing appropriately, and summarizing correctly and efficiently. If you use Module 4
well, you will be able to save a great deal of time, and simultaneously improve your writing. Module 4
also provides important information about academic integrity and honesty, and avoiding plagiarism.
Academic writing and critical thinking
To achieve highly at university, you must be able to demonstrate high levels of „effective‟ writing and
„critical‟ thinking. Can you explain each of these terms?
Go to the UniLearning (University of Wollongong) site for succinct sections on each area. (This can be
accessed directly or through the UoN library Services site.) http://unilearning.uow.edu.au/main.html
The summary below is based on the UniLearning site:
Effective writing has
A logical flow of ideas and cohesion
Links between sentences and paragraphs
Effective writing is achieved by
Macro devices (organisation and structure; flow; focus in sentences; paragraphs)
Micro devices to support each of the macro
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Critical thinking means that you demonstrate the ability
to
Assess the validity of information and its sources for your context
Distinguish between fact and opinion
Synthesise a number of factors and articulate a response
Provide a convincing argument in favour of your response
Critical thinking is achieved by
Evaluating and critqueing the information in front of you (see Infoskills Module 3)
Incorporating the skills of evaluation and „hard thinking‟ into your reading and note-making prior
to your writing
Using evidence to support your point of view
NB: Critical thinking is continued in Essays below.
You cannot demonstrate critical thinking if you cannot communicate! Note the following:
Grammar, punctuation and spelling
Excellent work must demonstrate clear communication
and be free of errors in grammar, punctuation and
spelling. The OWL (Online Writing Lab) website from
Purdue University is recommended to you. This site
includes exercises and feedback. You can access it
directly or through the UoN website:
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/grammar/index.h
tml
Another site with a wide variety of exercises on
grammar can be accessed at:
http://elc.polyu.edu.hk/cill/exercises
Finally, the UniLearning site referred to above has a
useful section on writing sentences:
http://unilearning.uow.edu.au/writing
Eliminating some common errors in language
Provide a topic sentence for each paragraph. Do not have one sentence paragraphs. A paragraph
develops/argues a point.
Use short sentences (up to 20 words) wherever possible.
Minimise the use of “this, these, those”. When you do use them, state the subject afterwards, for
example, “This result..”, “These studies..”
Do not use “etc”, “various” or “so on”. They are imprecise. If there are other cases, refer to them.
Do not use contractions such as “don‟t, didn‟t, can‟t”. You should write out the words in full.
Never use “it’s”; use “its” or “it is‟.
Learn when apostrophes are used to show ownership and if in doubt, do not use them.
Never use an apostrophe to show a plural.
Learn the difference between affect/effect and their/there and use them correctly.
It is important to understand the meaning of instruction words. For example, can you distinguish
between terms such as: analyse, compare, contrast, debate, discuss, evaluate, interpret, and justify?
3 Essays – structure and style
You may access help via Blackboard on http://www.newcastle.edu.au/unit/centre-for-teaching-and-
learning/learning-development/online-resources.html. The Study Help website from Murdoch
University (no longer available) is the source of the information summarized below.
The nature of university essays – this highlights the need for your essay to be
Focused and relevant to the topic
The result of wide reading and critical thinking
A logical argument o Shows points that are relevant to the argument (omitting the others) o Demonstrates a logical and coherent structure (including links) o Provides evidence (citations, quotes, examples) to support the argument
Presented in the conventional format o Has an introduction, body and conclusion o Uses appropriate language o Uses citations correctly and has the corresponding reference list o Is error-free in terms of language skills
The functional stages of an essay (shown as a diagram on the website)
Introduction – orientate/respond to topic; state purpose; outline what you will do
Body – write the main part here using sections that address the purpose of the essay. Each section will be a series of paragraphs, in logical order, that state your argument and
provide evidence for it; and link to the next paragraph
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Conclusion – summarise and draw out any implications of the discussion
4 Referencing – according to discipline conventions
Newcastle Business School requires you to use the APA (6 th ed.) style of referencing. This style uses the
author/date system of „in-text‟ citations in which you place the author‟s family name and year of publication in
parentheses immediately following the use of, or reference to, their work. At the end of your document you
generate a „Reference List‟ which provides full bibliographic details of the citations. (Full bibliographic details
include elements such as journal or publisher, edition or volume, place of publication, page numbers of journals
and date accessed for web sources).
Details of the APA style are available in the book: American Psychological Association (2010), Publication
Manual of the American Psychological Association (6 th
ed.). Washington DC, USA: American Psychological
Association. Below, you are provided with a brief summary covering the most basic requirements.
Summary of rules for referencing using APA style:
Rules for in-text citations Examples Paraphrasing or using ideas: include the author and
year in brackets or as appropriate
Two or more citations are placed in alphabetical
order, separated by a semi-colon
(Use „and‟ in text, „&‟ within brackets)
In a study of ethnic marketing, Pires and Stanton (2005) found
that loyalty differences exist between groups.
A recent ethnic marketing study showed… (Pires & Stanton,
2005).
Various authors have found a link between… (e.g., Carlson,
1999; Rosenberger, 2003a, 2003b).
Direct quotations: copy exactly, use quotation
marks and include the page number
Dean (2002) found that “Service quality of the call centre affects
customer loyalty to the organization” (p. 420).
Secondary sources: name the original author and
cite the secondary source. Include the secondary
source in your Reference List (that is, the one you
have read must be in the List)
The results of a study by Baxter (cited in Griffiths, 2005)
indicate…
Online material: use author, year (or n.d. if no date
is given), page number, paragraph number or the
heading of the appropriate section.
Kriz (2006) found ….
Studying sense making, Cowley (n.d., para 4) suggests …
Ngo and O‟Cass (2003) debate the…
Rules for the Reference List Examples Book
Solomon, M. R., Marshall, G. W., & Stuart, E. W. (2006). Marketing (4 th
ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Pearson Education. Chapter in an edited book Dean, A. M., & Rainnie, A. (2004). Symbolic analysts in the new
economy: Call centres in less favoured regions. In A. Rainnie & M.
Grobbelaar (Eds.), The new regionalism in Australia (pp. 103-122).
Sydney, Australia: Palgrave Press.
Journal article
(Include all authors in Ref List; in text,
use Rust et al., 2004)
Rust, R. T., Lemon, K. N., & Zeithaml, V. A. (2004). Return on
marketing: Using customer equity to focus marketing strategy. Journal of
Marketing, 68(1), 109-127.
Websites
Author (if available) and/or title of
document, date of publication (if
available, otherwise use n.d.), date
accessed (only necessary if the source
material may change over time), URL
Australian Bureau of Statistics (2007). 8624.0 - Retail and Wholesale
Industries, Australia: Commodities, 2005-06. Retrieved from http://0-
www.abs.gov.au.library.newcastle.edu.au/AUSSTATS/[email protected]/DetailsP
age/8624.02005-06?OpenDocument
Newspaper article Lee, J. (2005, August 6). Retail revolution. Sydney Morning Herald, p. 17.
Please note: 1. All references are listed in alphabetical order by surname of first author 2. Citations and references are for published materials, not lecture notes. Do not quote lecture notes: instead
you should access and cite the original sources.
3. As a UoN student, you are entitled to download a copy of EndNote from the library. EndNote is a database (a „bibliography manager‟) whereby you can input and manage all your references. It will
generate a selected Reference List very rapidly in any predetermined or customized style. If you obtain
EndNote early in your course and file all your references in it, you will save many, many hours over your
degree program. The library has resources and online training available for EndNote. See
http://www.newcastle.edu.au/service/library/endnote/index.html
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4. While APA style is the general style used at Newcastle Business School, different disciplines and courses may require different referencing styles. Check your Course Outline and, if in doubt, speak with your
Course Coordinator. You can easily change the output style from EndNote.
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5 Business reports
The UniLearning (University of Wollongong) website is an excellent resource for business reports. It
describes their structure, and has embedded links that provide detail on the purpose and contents of each
section in a report. You can access it directly:
http://unilearning.uow.edu.au/report/rep_business.html
Note that a business report should include the following sections
Title page - Report title, your name, course, date
Executive summary - A snapshot of the whole report including key findings and
recommendations
Table of contents - List of sections and page numbers
Introduction - Background and outline of structure
Body - The main part with sections and sub-sections that address the purpose of the
report and are distinguished by appropriate headings and sub-headings
Conclusion - States main inferences/implications of findings
Recommendations - Numbered, clearly stated, specific and actionable suggestions
Reference list - Essential for an academic report
Appendices - If appropriate, supporting data/information
It describes the structure of business reports, and has embedded links that provide detail on of each
section in a report.
Note: A ‘briefing paper’ is often a modified report on a specific topic or area.
6 Presentations
http://www.newcastle.edu.au/unit/centre-for-teaching-and-learning/learning-development/online-
resources.html (enter Blackboard and select „Making great presentations‟)
When preparing the content of your presentation, make sure that you:
Have clear objectives, and signposts to help the audience follow you
Choose the content carefully (you cannot cover everything)
Provide some background or introduction
Build in a logical structure and flow (this helps you when you are speaking)
Use convincing (show evidence) and interesting arguments/comments
Have an appropriate conclusion (do not „whimper‟ out)
Basic pointers for your delivery:
Communication must be clear and polished
Engage the audience, and use body language that shows enthusiasm
Facilitate questions that include as many members of the audience as possible
Provide relaxed, but serious, responses to questions
Use a suitable pace and manage your time
Prepare thoroughly and practice before the event!
7 Team work
Enter Blackboard as in 6 above and select „Working well in teams‟
Suggestions to help you work successfully in groups:
Meet regularly for specific purposes
Develop a timeline of meetings and outcomes
Discuss and agree members‟ roles in the group
Discuss and agree the expectations and study output of each group
Ensure everyone understands the contribution that each member will make
Use disagreements as an opportunity to discuss and improve overall outcomes
Be prepared to communicate, co-operate and compromise.