Only For The_Idea (RR)
Rava12345
instructions_for_rr.docxHi bro,
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This assignment has two parts, the first part is to respond to this (paragraph A) which is written by my classmate in Online discussion:
Paragraph A:
"When we were discussing poverty in yesterday's lecture, I started to think about this documentary I had watched last year called Living on One Dollar. The short film is about four guys who set out to live on $1 a day in rural Guatemala for 2 months. They experience hunger, parasites, and financial stress like many of us never have.
Needless to say, this film is a real eye opener to what many people are dealing with on a daily basis. You can watch the video on youtube if you click on the following link. The film is less than an hour long, so if you have the time please check it out!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J3gF3DPTCfA
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Respond to the above paragraph A.
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For the second part of the assignment >> I already wrote my response to the following paragraph, I just want you to revise my response to it and correct it if needed (I don’t think it would take too long).
So, you need to read BOTH the next paragraph (paragraph B) which is written by my classmate and then read my response to it on (paragraph C) which is written by me and need a quick revision. (I want you to make it similar to your style of writing >> I don’t want the teacher to notice the difference).
paragraph B:
"I couldn't help but notice that in one of the videos we watched on poverty last class, a woman had 7 kids to support. Even in the united states, I'd imagine that supporting that amount of kids would be a challenge. I know that a huge reason people have kids in 3rd world countries is to help with the family business, but maybe that is part of the reason that families have a hard time supporting themselves. But who knows? This could just be me thinking I have exclusive knowledge. Any thoughts from you guys?"
Bellow is is my response to the previous paragraph- I already wrote it, just do exactly as I asked above:
paragraph C:
"As someone who has seven sisters and four brothers (12 siblings total), I profoundly see the point you are making. It's undoubtedly true that Mothers have a very hard time supporting themselves because they mostly focus on helping their children. I happened to witness many crazy stories illustrate that. Such as a mother has a serious health condition, but she didn't tell anyone and resisted the pain for three years. She was worry that if her children find out, they would ask her to go to the hospital so she won't be able to help them the way she wishes. Eventually, it was cancer!
Also, I think the poverty is not the only reason for having many children in many cases. There are many other reasons driven by culture and religion just to name but a few."
READ EVERY SINGLE WORD THIS TIME, THERE ARE MANY new SMALL IMPORTANT DETAILS.
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I hope that's clear to you, ask me for any further clarification.
Thanks
