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Peihao Peng

ESL 53C

Jan 27th, 2016

Essay #1

Life Goes On

Robert Frost once said, “If there is one thing in life that I have learned about life it is … it goes on.” This statement illustrates life will face numerous difficulties, but but no matter what difficulties, life goes on. In my life, one thing let me understand Robert Frost said. This story is from my college life. This story let me know how to face my life in the future.

This story began in 2015. Before I met this thing, I could not face difficulties and setbacks. But when I met this thing, I changed my mind. I knew the meaning of what Robert Frost said “Life it is… goes on.” Last year, one day I went to play basketball, after I hurt my right knee. When I went to the hospital to check my body, and the doctor told me I needed surgery. My attitude towards life has changed gradually. Because this is my first time took surgery.

After surgery, I didn’t know something was wrong with me. I think I got this hurt, reason is I’m not lucky. However I did a lot of mistake in spring semester 2015. I usually used my injury as an excuse. I used this excuse to escape a lot of things.Example I used this excuse to skip class, Because in that time I didn’t want to go to school, so I use my surgery be the excuse to skip the class. Finally I drop all class in spring semester.The other things is after surgery, I need went to did the Physiotherapy, But I use other excuse to skip it. Finally my body recovered very bad. and In the future I spent a lot of time to find my lost time. After I understood escape can’t solve any problem.

In this story I learned a lot of things. The first I learned is use positive attitude to face life. If I use positive attitude to face difficulties, I think I will got the different result , Because when different attitudes will have a different methods to solve problem, However positive attitude can give us much help. The second I learned is protect body. Because when I got hurt first time I don’t need do the surgery, but I didn’t protect my body, and go to play basketball. Finally I hurt my right knee again. So I understand I need learned to protect my body, because some bodily harm will follow me forever.

However, In this story, I understand life is going on. This sentence would like to tell people, whether you have meet any good thing or a bad thing. life never wait for you. We need to learn how to face difficulties and setbacks, and learn how to adjust their lives. When we learned how to use positive to face the live, our life will become different.