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Hello A-plus writer
I would like to write a letter to a Rehabilitation center that I know very well. They are also my business partners in Dubai . I suggested their Rehabilitation center to my teacher, but they sent me a response that does not represent their big name. they did not mention any thing in it.
I need to write a letter that covers the following:
Frankly, I was shocked when received a three-line email regarding the treatment of Dr. V that does not contain any information at all, except you can treat her. Do you think you can attract a professor in a university to be treated at your rehabilitation center by saying we can do it with out elaborating what you will do? Secondly, your response should be in the form of a report or at least a letter with your letterhead attached in an email, stating the diagnosing of her condition, the course of treatment, total of procedures and how many procedures per day, duration of treatment, and the cost of treatment including accommodations and food. She teaches graduate studies at a university and she has to know exactly the duration so she can get a leave from the university and someone should cover for her. If I forwarded your email to her, she will definitely underestimate you, and will not consider your center. As you know, I know your center very well and I have been treated there for two weeks. I know that you are capable of handling serious cases not just an ordinary case. But you have to express your self.
Thirdly, you suppose to benefit from this opportunity to market your center by attaching an introduction to your center and the other medical programs that you offer (you may refer to your website). Also, you may attach some of the points of interests to see around your area, Prague area, or even in Czeck as a whole, entertainment in the area, museums, and so on ((you may refer to some tourism websites).. It has to be written in a marketing sense.
the email suppose to be sent to Dr. V and copy me and not to me only.
By the way, I sent a request to DD center in Dubai, and received a professional reply in one day that I was proud of as a member of the board of that company, and she was happy of the prompt response.
In Poland, I met two Arab, and recommended for them your center. I ask them to send me their medical reports to be sent to you, but such response from you will not be encouraging for them to consider your rehabilitation center.
In fact, she asked me yesterday about your feedback, but I did not forward your email to her.
I would highly appreciate if you send her a report that represent your big name, that contains the procedures of treatments, duration of treatment, and cost.
Please copy me on your email.
Best regards,
Ali
