Writing/Reading HW
! ! WR122!Essay!Rubric!–!A.!Brown! Introduction! Mastery!;!10! Exceeds!;!9! Strong!;!8! Satisfactory!;!7! Limited!;!6! Flawed!0;5!
Refers&to&topic& choice;&thesis;& subtopics;& purpose;&and& ability&to&entice& audience&to& continue&reading&
• Creative&introduction&of& the&topic’s&key& questions/terms&
• Thoroughly&defines& subtopics&to&be&reviewed&
• Precise,&opinionated&thesis& statement&
• Topic&creatively&&& accurately&meets& assignment&expectations&
• Clear,&wellCdeveloped& introduction&of&the&topic’s& key&questions/terms&
• Fitting&description&of& subtopics&to&be&reviewed&
• Clear&thesis&statement& • Topic&accurately&meets& assignment&expectations& &
• Strong&introduction&of&the& topic’s&key& questions/terms&
• Adequately&defines& subtopics&to&be&reviewed&
• Suitable&thesis&statement& • Topic&accurately&meets& assignment&expectations&
&
• Acceptable&introduction&of& the&topic’s&key& questions/terms&
• Satisfactorily&defines& subtopics&to&be&reviewed&
• Adequate,&ordinary&thesis& statement&
• Conventional&topic&meets& assignment&expectations&
&
• Vague&introduction&of&the& topic’s&key& questions/terms&
• Unclear&definition&of& subtopics&to&be&reviewed&
• Weak,&unconnected&thesis& statement&
• Topic&lacks&connection&to& assignment&expectations&
&
• Missing&an&introduction&of& the&topic’s&key& questions/terms&
• No&definition&of&subtopics& to&be&reviewed&
• Underdeveloped&or& unidentifiable&thesis& statement&
• Topic&does¬&meet&the& assignment&expectations&
Content/! Analysis!
Mastery!;!10! Exceeds!;!9! Strong!;!8! Satisfactory!;!7! Limited!;!6! Flawed!0;5!
Refers&to& integration&of& support;& argument;& application&of& analysis;& counterargumen ts;&rebuttals&
• Compelling&&&credible& support/references&
• Insightful&&&engaging& analysis&
• Careful&attention&to& alternative&perspectives&
• Mastered&a&balance&of& opinion/support/analysis&
• Substantive&&&varied& credible& support/references&
• Relevant,&detailed&analysis& • Alternative&perspectives& analyzed&
• Effectively&balanced& opinion/support/analysis&
• Varied&&&credible& support/references&
• Relevant&analysis& • Alternative&perspectives& considered&
• Balanced&opinion/& support/analysis&
&
• Some&trivial& support/references,&but& credible&
• Surface&level&analysis& • Superficial&attention&to& alternative&perspectives&
• Acceptable&balance&of& opinion/support/analysis&
• Inconsistent&or&lacking& varied,&credible&support&
• Vague&analysis& • Lack&of&consideration&for& alternative&perspectives&
• Significant&imbalance&of& opinion/support/analysis&
• No&control&of&information& support&to&thesis&
• No&meaningful&analysis&& • Missing&alternative& perspectives&
• Does¬&have&a&balance& of&opinion/& support/analysis&
Conclusion! Mastery!;!10! Exceeds!;!9! Strong!;!8! Satisfactory!;!7! Limited!;!6! Flawed!0;5!
& Refers&to&the& closure&of&the& paper;&the&point& to&which&the& evidence&and& argument&leads&
• Meaningful&review&of&key& conclusions&
• Creative&integration&of& thesis&statement&
• Insightful&discussion&of&the& impact&of&the&researched& material&on&the&topic&
• Avoids&introducing&new& ideas/information&
• Leads&readers&to&an& understanding&of&the& importance&of&this&topic/& issue&
• Meaningful&integration&of& the&expert&interview& (analysis&paper&only)&
• Detailed&review&of&key& conclusions&
• Strong&integration&of& thesis&statement&
• Thorough&discussion&of&the& impact&of&the&researched& material&on&the&topic&
• Avoids&introducing&new& ideas/information&
• Leads&readers&to&an& understanding&of&the& importance&of&this&topic/& issue&
• Clear&integration&of&the& expert&interview&(analysis& paper)&
• Basic&review&of&key& conclusions&
• Integration&of&thesis& statement&
• Discussion&of&the&impact&of& the&researched&material& on&the&topic&
• Avoids&introducing&new& ideas/information&
• Indirectly&tells&readers& what&they&should& understand&about&this& topic/issue&
• Integration&of&the&expert& interview&(analysis&paper& only)&
• Underdeveloped&review&of& key&conclusions&
• Exact©&of&thesis& statement&from& introduction&
• Surface&level&discussion&of& the&impact&of&the& researched&material&on& the&topic&
• Introduces&new& ideas/information&
• Tells&readers&what&they& should&understand&about& this&topic/issue&
• Awkward&integration&of& the&expert&interview& (analysis&paper&only)&
• Limited&review&of&key& conclusions&
• Exact©&of&thesis& statement&from& introduction&
• Vague&discussion&of&the& impact&of&the&researched& material&on&the&topic&
• Introduces&new& ideas/information&
• Weak&connection&of&the& readers&to&the&importance& of&this&topic/issue&
• Weak&integration&of&the& expert&interview&(analysis& paper&only)&
• Underdeveloped&review&of& key&conclusions&
• Missing&restatement&of& thesis&
• Lacking&a&discussion&of&the& impact&of&the&researched& material&on&the&topic&
• Introduces&new& ideas/information&
• Does¬&connect&the& readers&to&the&importance& of&this&topic/issue&
• No&clear&integration&of&the& expert&interview&(analysis& paper&only)&
Organization! /Focus!
Mastery!;!10! Exceeds!;!9! Strong!;!8! Satisfactory!;!7! Limited!;!6! Flawed!0;5!
& Refers&to&the& order&and&focus& of&ideas&
• Consistent&&&purposeful& focus&
• Carefully&formed&&& thorough&organizational& pattern&
• Graceful&transitions& connecting&ideas&&
• Consistent&focus& • Logical&organizational&
pattern& • Smooth&transitions&
connecting&ideas&&
• Clear&focus& • WellCdeveloped&
organizational&pattern& • Fitting&transitions&
connecting&ideas&&
• Loses&focus&at×,&but& returns&to&main&ideas&&
• Adequate&organizational& pattern,&some§ions&of& disorganization&
• Adequate&transitions& connecting&ideas&&
• Consistently&loses&focus& and&does¬&return&to& main&ideas&
• Inconsistent& organizational&pattern&
• Transitions&often&do¬& connect&ideas& & &
• Flawed&focus&on&topic& throughout&paper&
• No&control&of& organizational&pattern&
• Missing&transitions& connecting&ideas&&
&
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Diction/Gramm ar/Mechanics!
Mastery!;!10! Exceeds!;!9! Strong!;!8! Satisfactory!;!7! Limited!;!6! Flawed!0;5!
& Refers&to&using& words& appropriate&to& the&audience& and&purpose;& choosing&words& for&deliberate& effect;&to& sentence& structure,& spelling,&word& usage,&grammar,& punctuation,& and&ability&to& proofread& &
• Compelling&&&insightful& word&choice/deliberate& use&of&language;&avoids& clichés&&
• Objective,&formal&voice& predominates;&uses& informal&language& if/when&necessary&
• Avoids&first&person& throughout&
• Mastery&of&replacing&“to& be”&verbs&and&avoids& passive&voice&
• Sentences&carefully& formed&&&positioned&with& attention&to&emphasis,& rhythm,&&&pace&to& engage&the&reader&
• Demonstrates&mastery&of& spelling/grammar/& punctuation&
• Meaningful,&effective& word&choice&to&convey& ideas;&avoids&clichés&&
• Formal&voice&throughout& • Avoids&first&person& • Occasional&use&of&“to&be”& verbs&and&avoids&passive& voice&
• Sentences&are&accurately& formed&and&vary&in& length,&pattern,&&&rhythm&
• Demonstrates& understanding&of& grammar,&spelling,&&& punctuation&
• Effective&word&choice&to& convey&ideas;&avoids& clichés&&
• Formal&voice&throughout& • Avoids&first&person& • Minimal&use&of&“to&be”& verbs&and&avoids&passive& voice&
• Sentences&show&a&variety& in&length,&pattern,&&& rhythm&
• Demonstrates& understanding&of&most& grammar,&spelling,&&& punctuation&
• Conventional&word& choice/deliberate&use&of& language;&clichés&&
• Mostly&formal&voice& • Few&first&person&errors& • Consistent&use&of&“to&be”& verbs&and&avoids&passive& voice&
• Sentences&show&some& variation&in&variety&and& pattern& Occasional&incorrect&use& of&words,&spelling,&&& punctuation&
• Vague,&ordinary,& incorrect&word&choice;& extensive&use&of&clichés&&
• Informal&voice&prominent&& • Continued&use&of&first& person&
• Continued&use&of&“to&be”& verbs&and&passive&voice& that&distracts&the&reader& from&the&premise&of&the& paper&
• Simple&sentences,& continues&sentence& structure&errors&
• Frequent&errors&in&verb& agreement,&pronoun& reference,&spelling&and& punctuation&&
• Word&choice&does¬&fit& audience&or&purpose&
• Informal&verse,&wordiness& throughout&
• First&person&throughout& • No&control&of&“to&be”& verbs&or&passive&voice& preventing&readers&from& following&the&paper&
• Continuous&errors&in& sentence&structure,&verb& agreement,&pronoun& reference,&spelling&and& punctuation&
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APA! Formatting/!
Documentation! Mastery!;!10! Exceeds!;!9! Strong!;!8! Satisfactory!;!7! Limited!;!6! Flawed!0;5!
& Refers&to& application&of& documentation& &&formatting;& integration&of& source&material;& uses¤t& APA&citation& style;&avoids& plagiarism;& utilizes& turnitin.com;&&
• Mastery&of& paraphrasing/summarizin g/quotation&of&source& information&
• Correct&parenthetical& citations&
• Correct&reference&citation& • Properly&formatted&title&
page&(running&head,&page& number,&title,&name)&
• Correct&margins,&headers,& font,&spacing&
• Avoids&excessive& quotations&(>5%)&
• Exceeds&minimum& scholarly&sources&
• Discusses&all&references& • Meets&min/max&page&
length&(outside&of& title/reference&page)&
• Multiple&essay&revisions& submitted&to& Turnitin.com,&applied& originality&report& feedback&
• Thorough¶phrasing/& summarizing/quotation& of&source&information&
• Correct&parenthetical& citations&
• Correct&reference&citation& • Properly&formatted&title&
page&(running&head,&page& number,&title,&name)&
• Correct&margins,&headers,& font,&spacing&
• Avoids&excessive& quotations&(>10%)&
• Exceeds&minimum& scholarly&sources&
• Discusses&all&references& • Meets&min/max&page&
length&(outside&of& title/reference&page)&
• Submitted&to& Turnitin.com,&applied& originality&report& feedback&
• Accurate& paraphrasing/summarizin g/quotation&of&source& information&
• Minor&errors&in& parenthetical&citations&
• Minor&errors&in&reference& citation&
• Minor&errors&in& formatting&title&page& (running&head,&page& number,&title,&name)&
• Minor&errors&with& margins,&headers,&font,& spacing&
• Avoids&excessive& quotations&(>15%)&
• Meets&minimum&scholarly& sources&
• Discusses&all&references& • Min/max&page&length&
(outside&of& title/reference&page)&
• Turnitin.com,&originality& report&
• Paraphrasing/summarizin g/quotation&of&source& information&
• Parenthetical&citations& • Reference&citation& • Formatted&title&page&
(running&head,&page& number,&title,&name)&
• Margins,&headers,&font,& spacing&
• Avoids&excessive& quotations&(>15%)&
• Minor&errors&with& scholarly&sources&
• Discusses&all&references& • Min/max&page&length&
(outside&of& title/reference&page)&
• Turnitin.com,&originality& report& &
• Paraphrasing/summarizin g/quotation&of&source& information&
• Parenthetical&citations& • Reference&citation& • Formatted&title&page&
(running&head,&page& number,&title,&name)&
• Margins,&headers,&font,& spacing&
• Avoids&excessive& quotations&(>20%)&
• Major&errors&with& scholarly&sources&
• Discusses&all&references& • Min/max&page&length&
(outside&of& title/reference&page)&
• Turnitin.com,&originality& report&
&
• Paraphrasing/summarizin g/quotation&of&source& information&
• Parenthetical&citations& • Reference&citation& • Formatted&title&page&
(running&head,&page& number,&title,&name)&
• Margins,&headers,&font,& spacing&
• Avoids&excessive& quotations&(<20%)&
• No&scholarly&sources& • Discusses&all&references& • Min/max&page&length&
(outside&of& title/reference&page)&
• Turnitin.com,&originality& report&
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