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Aljeraiwi

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Professor Martin

English 113B

15 February 2016

Sacrifice Your Privacy

Did you know that your internet history has already been saved and archived . Privacy the state or condition of being free from being observed or disturbed by other people . Humans from ages has privacy in every aspects In their life’s but in the last decades with the invention of the internet governments and companies started to invade people privacy . People from different ages started to use the internet and the social media , the more people that use the internet and the social media the more privacy we face . Although invading people privacy leads people to problems like divorces , it ought that it is very useful to track people moves through the internet and social media because it protect us from terror attacks and decrease of the street crimes and it help employers to find the best people to hire ; therefore , privacy something we must sacrifice in order to participate in today’s world .

The internet build a network for people to communicate faster and easily better than every way to contact someone . Following people tracks helps government and military basis with funding terror attacks , it protect the society and the world from the bad people to harm our beautiful world . Many terrorist attacks has been fell down by the internet without the internet will never could find the people who want to harm our world and society and that’s what we need we need technology that help us to catch people who are planning to ruin our world . In the article “ Terrorists and the Internet “ by Eben Kaplan , Kaplan states that with internet it is easily to find terrorists , and it also help the US government and military to find al-Qaeda members by tracking there location to know where they are .

Installing large amount of surveillance cameras around the neighborhoods and the streets creates safer and more effective streets . Public surveillance cameras provides us with video recording with the incident we need and can be reviewed many times as much you need . The wide variety of cameras around the streets help us to catch criminals with evidence .In the article “Chicago's Camera Network Is Everywhere “ the writer mention that the city of Chicago has installed more than 1500 cameras that linked with police around the city to decrease the numbers of crimes in Chicago . And also mentioned in the article that a police spokesman said that installing 1500 cameras around the city of Chicago has "aided in thousands of arrests." . For example, the cameras around the city caught a footage that one of the Chicago gang member has shoot fire on a bus , the video used as an evidence and the evidence led the gang member to 100 years in the prison .

Browsing people profiles on social media websites has never been easier than the period we are in right now . By browsing people profiles you can know where the person live and how old is he and what his favorite actor and what his favorite team all that information you can get it by just one click in your computer or device . In the last ten years , employers started to check the applicants profiles to decide whether they are going to hire this person of not . In “ Employers Use Social Networks to Check Out Applicants “ showed that photos is the most biggest factor in hiring decision followed by drinking and drug use . Other stuff that the employers check is the online communication skills and that’s hurt many people in hiring decisions . The most popular website that employers check their applicants profiles are Facebook followed by LinkedIn . Many companies started to follow this method and it works well by the help of the internet and the social media .

On the other hand , there are many people against privacy and they think we should not sacrifice for it because it’s leading us to bigger problems . In there point of view they think that the government are doing illegal activities by getting all of our personal information and our phone records . They also think that’s people rights should be always decided by the people themselves not the government and small corporations . However , tracking people phone calls and recorders would prevent us from many terror attacks in the past for example 9/11 , this is threat is bigger than our privacy because we are losing human beings in this way . People should see the pros and cons for every subject that impact our society and in this subject I think that the pros of scarifying our privacy are more than cons , and that’s what really we want we want to make people life better and easier than ever .

At the end , People should not need to worry about their personal privacy and information because it’s benefit us in more in many ways and aspects . Providing our personal information and privacy are used in good way to help us . Losing privacy nowadays is different because it is for our own goods because it protect us from terror attacks and decrease of the street crimes and it help employers to find the best people to hire . We need to sacrifice our privacy to participate in today’s world to have safer and better life .