Easy assignment requires a smart writer who reads carefully all instructions!!

This paragraph is written by me, I just want you to revise it and correct its grammar and structure if needed please. Do not change its meaning please:

"Revolution" has been always a huge controversial concept for me. In the early days of me getting involved in this new notion, I didn't know why I felt it's something negative and always a good move to be far away from. I think because of the way we were fed stories about the past revolutions, and there is the thing that always seems to put revolution and violence as one entity or two that cannot be unattached. Media is undoubtedly one of the most force factors contributing to paint these ideas into our minds. However, since The brilliant Thomas Jefferson says, "Every generation needs a new revolution" which I found agreeable as long as it is won't be through violence. Also, knowing that there were successful revolutions in the history with no violence involved. To that point I was fine, I got that there may be successful revolutions with no violence involved that would lead people's lives to better situations. However, I'm still wondering is it possible to achieve a successful revolution by just correcting the drawbacks of an authority without replacing it and creating a new authority? In other words, in order to accomplish a successful revolution, must we replace the existing authority?

I reached this point of me questioning myself about that because the clever Albert Einstein says, "We can't solve a problem by using the same kind of thinking we used when we created it." Not only that but also R. Buckminster Fuller says, "You never change things by fighting the existing reality. To change something, build a new model that makes the existing model obsolete." Frankly, after getting all these controversial ideas in my head, I'm still not sure what's the answer to that question; I just wish there could be a successful revolution with no violence, fighting and replacing the former authority.

Does anyone have any thoughts?