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Nowadays, more and more Chinese students choose to study abroad especially America. However, a large amount of Chinese students do not know the exact reason makes them decide to study abroad. They just consider America as a great and free country. They can enjoy their lives and have more free time without their parents’ care. They do not know what they want to learn from studying in America and what kind of influence and impression they can bring to Americans. They even do not know what do they look like in American college student’s perspective. On contrary, there are still many excellent Chinese International students study in America. They impress their classmates, professors and friends by their maths skills and hard work. Hence, I want to talk about different kinds of Chinese students, why they decide to study abroad, and what they look like in American college students’ perspective and in their own perspective.

Because of the huge population base, Chinese government uses a very cruel selection in their education system. The college entrance exam is the only way for Chinese students to testify their competence of knowledge. The students have to study for twelve years for passing the exam. Hence, they can get access to a good university in China. Millions of students take the exam every year. Chinese government wants to select the real talents from so many people. Therefore, the exam is incredibly hard and includes nine subjects. If someone wants to get into the top ten universities in China, he must have to learn more in his free time to have more chance than their peer competitors. However, it means learning takes up almost all the time in his life. He can not follow his heart to do many different thing in his childhood. His weekend will be taken up by different cram schools. Every coins has two sides. I am not saying “college entrance exam” is a bad thing. The exam is absolutely fair in China. The main purpose of the exam is built on equal access to opportunity for everyone. No matter you are rich or poor, everyone is equal in the college entrance exam. Therefore, it is also a good way for people to change their whole life through the exam. However, not everyone accepts the exam to take up most time of their students’ era. The international students is part of these people. They wants to try different thing and have more freedom in their life, so that they choose to abandon the exam and study abroad.They are the first kind of Chinese International student.We can say that they have long vision and have courage to live and study in a new environment. Before they start abroad lives, they have already made a plan for themselves. The second kind of International students are the “lost” students. They do not know what they want and what they want to learn. Hence, their parents just want to give their children a new environment. Maybe, they can find their new life target in the new environment. On contrary, many of them still do not find their target in the new environment. And, they become more degenerate abroad.

In recent years, Chinese International students become the largest group of international students in America. But, They not only bring huge economic benefits to different American universities, but also bring many difficulties toAmerica. In the first place, many Chinese international students’ English skill is not high enough. They can not understand from people or speak with others. Because, in their mind, the main goal of learning English is to pass the exam. And they have already get into the university, so that they do not have to learn English anymore. Therefore, they just learn for the exam instead of the language. In the second place, they do not always ask questions or discuss in the classes. They just keep silent almost all the time. In the third place, it is hard for international students to fit in American society. They think they receive disregard from others and the local people can not understand some international students’ action. In the last place and also the foremost, the Chinese students lack honesty. Because, Chinese students lack the awareness of copyright. Sometimes, they just copy others’ work as their own. However, from now, the American Universities still can not resist the huge Chinese students market. They still can find many talents from the students. Admittedly, when the Chinese International students face the new environment, they just stay in their group and resist to contact with locals’. In my opinion, there are two reasons for the difficulties. The first one is the international students never encounter many dilemmas in their domestic life. Their parents always take care everything for them. It makes them lack the ability of self control. In the new environment, it is easier for them to get worse without their parents’ supervision. The second one is that the college also has the responsibility for that. Many new international students are not familiar with the American education. The college think that the international students should adapt the new teaching style on their own. On occasions, some professors even forget there are some international students in the class. Furthermore, many universities accept many unqualified students for financial interest. It is not only harmful for the students but also foe their families. Their parents have to pay more and their children have to suffer more abroad. Therefore, the universities have to change in order to solve the difficulties that the Chinese international students bring.

In the circle of the Chinese vast and growing middle class, the admission notice of foreign universities has become the symbol of success.The parents compete their children’s university rank with each others’. This undesirable trend makes people forget the real meaning of studying abroad. The real meaning for the international students is that they have to become the talents with international perspectives and competitive capabilities. The blind comparison between Chinese parents is not acceptable. Therefore, Chinese international students should stop using forged recommendation letter, transcript and their personal statement to apply for the foreign universities. It will make the reputation of Chinese international students getting worse. I know nowadays a few Chinese students cheated in the SAT and get caught by the college board. But, I believe whenever the Chinese international students can understand that it is important to goto a college that is good fit for you, even if it is not the top of a ranking list, the foreign universities will be more pleasure to see more Chinese international students on campus. From a normal Chinese student’s perspective, I want to say that to my peers ”just show what you are in real life to the Universities. No matter where you are, they will definitely find you through your talents and potentials”.

When we can find Chinese International students in almost all the American universities, I am curious about what we look like in American students’ perspective. I found an article about the Chinese International student’s life under an American college student’s lens. When it was published in China, it influence a lot of parents and students who want to study in America in the future. Because, what the article shows is totally different from what they dream about the life in America. The parents think subconsciously that their children in America are working harder, positive about everything, getting well with each other and feel comfortable with the new environment. However, the article does not show the positive side of the international students rather than show the mistakes and negative side of the international students. It makes the Chinese know the international students’ lives more comprehensive. All the time, the international students’ just mention their part of their positive lives to their friends and families. This phenomenon makes the people in China does not know too much about international students. The article makes the people become more alert about study abroad.

The girl, Daisy, study in Ohio University. She wants to use the photos to convey: The Chinese International student come to America with their parents’ hope and pressure. Their parents pay the tuition with their long time-savings. Therefore, they are expected to graduate successfully and have a brilliant future. However, they ruin their lives and become desperate when they just can’t adapt the new environment easily. Over six hundred Chinese International students study in Ohio University. But, many of them’s language skill does not meet the college requirement, so that they have to take preparatory course to learn English. The course can not give them the feeling of being a college student. They start to give up and become desperate about their abroad life.Daisy took photos when they are smoking, playing mahjong(a Chinese game played by four people with 144 titles), drag racing and get drunk. After she published the photos in China. Many Chinese students become crazy and their parents become stressed. She never thought her article can be so influential in China. At first, many Chinese students in Ohio want her delete the photos and she refused. In her mind, it is nothing wrong with the photos. After a while, she started to understand them. Because, the photos in Chinese parents’ mind are so negative. She ignored the feeling from their parents and themselves. In their parents’ mind, their children do not live like what they imagine. However, Daisy think the photos about their lives are just about Chinese students just want to do something fun and become de-stressed. The Chinese have already studied a lot on campus. They do not think too much except study and just have some hobbies. The real thing the Chinese students have to learn is to think independently. If they just study for their parents, they will not be motivated by themselves. They have to learn the meaning of studying, their real interests and start to plan their future. The real thing Daisy want to show China is not” the lost dream of study abroad” but ”not here or there”. It means that the Chinese students are trapped between the difference of two kinds of culture.

Many foreigners consider Chinese International students as the symbol of diligent. However, in my perspective, comparing with American students, many of us are not diligent enough. When we enter the college, we just relax in our study. Because, we are unconsciously influenced by the Chinese learning environment. We just have to study hard in high school and we can enjoy our life in the college. However, in America, college life is the beginning of your lifetime study. Before entering college, the American students have already known why they have to study, what kind of life they want to pursue in the future and what kind of people they are. In China, we pay too much attention on our basic education. The basic education does not only make our knowledge base become more solid, but also deprive the right of thinking about what kind of life we want to live in the future. Everyone’s life goal is different. In American college, the American students do not only have a solid knowledge base, but also work hard. The path is what they choose on their own and the knowledge is what they intend to learn. Therefore, they are motivated by themselves to study hard. Comparison with Chinese International students, their learning motivations are complicated. Hence, new environment and unclear target make them feel depressed and aimless about their study.