two pages as an international
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Talal Bazheer
CMN1310
Feedback Assignment Part Two
22/10/2015
1. Most feedback about me was the volume which paly big side of my presentation. Also body language was one of the feedbacks I received. Most feedback that I should work on was about give the audience eyes contact. I really should keep practicing look to my audience. There is some feedback that I should work on was about vocal pauses.
2. I think the feedback was totally truth, it match up with feedback that I gave myself. I was expecting that feedbacks from the professor and classmates. What I think and I wouldn’t know about myself was the body language and the hand movement. After I saw the feedbacks I realize that my and was moving. It surprise me, it was different about what I gave to myself.
3. I did really well on introduction of concept. I knew some information about it, I was really confidence to say what I know. Even if it was according to someone. I covered everything that I know about the causeway and it helps me to be more confident to say the next point. I missed things from my speech that I have to say. The closing and review statement I didn’t organized my speech very well and that makes my lose my confidence but overall it goes well.
4. I should work on my eye contact while I’m giving a speech. And I agree and understand that my eye contact. I received many feedbacks that said I should give a look to my audience. But when I look I really lose points and I start to get nervous. So that’s why I didn’t want to look. With days ill try to get better on this points.
5. I have been set goals to meet. I did meet some of them, I prepared myself earlier and practicing the speech many time. It was good for me because I can have an idea very well about what I’m going to say. With practicing I can come up with words can support my speech.
