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Passive/Active Voice Quiz (10 points)

1. Highlight the instances of passive voice in the following sentence:

It can be assumed that a large portion of these energy loads are caused by computers, televisions, phones, and other electronic devices that are constantly plugged into outlets, therefore using constant energy.

2. Convert the following three sentences from PASSIVE to ACTIVE voice:

Note: use the “by whom/what?” test to identify the agent.

The optimal retrofits will be delivered to the client in a final proposal, and with these recommendations, NAU may move forward with the implementation of these design solutions.  

Early design ideas to be discussed throughout this report include updates to the HVAC system, lighting, windows, and floors.

This pre-proposal report will highlight all the main topics and methods to provide an accurate representation of how Szopinski Hall is used.

3. In your own words (your most formal writing!), explain the following:

The benefits of using Active Voice rather than Passive Voice in Technical Writing:

Instances where Passive Voice might be appropriate in Technical Writing: