Assessment 3: Reflective Learning Journal Report

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Hello,

I need more revision on this assignment please. I have attached a document with critical comments on part of the assignment. Other parts have not been checked so use the comments provided to check the whole document and rectify please.

Cross check that the feedback/comments from professor has been addressed right through in the assignment.

The professor does not normally review the entire assignment but rather provide feedback on one page outline based on its structure. So based on the feedback/comments from the professor, I am required to reflect on the feedback right through the assignment to demonstrate that I understood the course requirements fully.

Please HIGHLIGHT (red or yellow) where you have demonstrated (one example) in order to address the comments from professor, right throughout the assignment. Most importantly the arguments are backed by literature and below is an example.

Literature based evidence from the articles, sentences need to start with example “ In line with the literature based evidence or research based evidence or On review of literature I found selection of change types, scale and approaches are not definitive, rather a contingency model for the context (Dunphy & Stace, 1993, 1998; Stace, 1996) or unilateral methods (Waldersee & Griffiths, 2003) are best”.

Sorry, I sound pedantic but this assignment is last from this course and it carries lot of weighting from the course and if I don’t get good marks, it will affect my grades significantly. I totally understand that it is not that easy to synthesize everything given the word count limit but I guess that is the challenge and obviously I was struggling, hence seeking your service to assist me.

Based on professor’s feedback I am little bit paranoid that perhaps I haven’t demonstrated everything required from the course. I will also scan through the assignment to validate whether professor’s feedback has been addressed but I am relying on your for completeness purely from academic perspective. I will take your response to comments this time as final and submit my assignment