Final Project - Business Systems Analysis/Design

Proficient

Needs Improvement

Not Evident

Database Needs and Options: Database Needs 

Points:

23 (23%)

Identifies database technology needs that will support new online services based on the current state of the company and explains answer

Points:

17.25 (17.25%)

Identifies some database technology needs that will support new online services, but not enough to address the problem thoroughly based on the current state of the company, and explains answer or attempts to explain answer unsuccessfully

Feedback:

Good job Marvin but you did not identify the database technology. You went straight to the options. Please review pages 102-104 in the etext and it will give you idea of the type of database technology you can discuss. Then you can keep this portion to use as the options. You do have some things in this section that are not relevant that you can streamline this with and just stick to the basics that is needed for this section. Human capital is not important here. There were a few other fluffy type things that can be removed. Remember we have to keep everything streamlined for the final. Please make sure to revamp this section before submitting it in the final project.

Points:

0 (0%)

Does not identify database technology needs

Database Needs and Options: Database Options 

Points:

23 (23%)

Researches and presents database options that will support new online services

Feedback:

Your options that you proivded were good. You did provide support by answering questions from the rubric that was critical to this case. Good job.

Points:

17.25 (17.25%)

Researches and presents some database options that do not appropriately support the company’s needs

Points:

0 (0%)

Presents no database options

Database Needs and Options: Pros and Cons 

Points:

23 (23%)

Identifies the pros and cons of the database options presented thoroughly and supports with details

Feedback:

You did a good job of addressing the pros and cons for each of the options. You also provided good supporting statements for additional details.

Points:

17.25 (17.25%)

Identifies some pros and cons of the database options and supports with some details

Points:

0 (0%)

Does not identify pros and cons of database options

Database Needs and Options: Real-World Example 

Points:

23 (23%)

Provides a real-world example of what has or has not worked for another company and how this example informs the options you present to your business owner

Points:

17.25 (17.25%)

Provides a real-world example of what has or has not worked for another company, but does not explain how this example informs the options presented to the business owner

Points:

0 (0%)

Does not provide a real-world example

Feedback:

You did not provide a real-world example. Do some research on a company that uses one or both of your options as way of providing proof to Mary that one option may work better for her than another. Please make sure to revamp this section before submitting it in the final project.

Articulation of Response 

Points:

8 (8%)

Submission has no major errors related to citations, grammar, spelling, syntax, or organization; submission uses template

Points:

6 (6%)

Submission has major errors related to citations, grammar, spelling, syntax, or organization that negatively impact readability and articulation of main ideas; submission uses template

Feedback:

Some of your citations are not done correctly and I did not see a reference page. Please make sure to revamp this section before submitting it in the final project.

Points:

0 (0%)

Submission has critical errors related to citations, grammar, spelling, syntax, or organization that prevent understanding of ideas; submission does not use template