Training Proposal

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Proposal Assignment

COMM 495/ 7980

Training Proposal for Homosexuality, Its Challenges, Stereotypes and History

Missing: an introductory paragraph requesting approval for this project.

Introduction [Wrong word. You introduce a topic in unsolicited proposals. When responding to a call for proposals, the appropriate term is background. ]

This proposal endeavors [CONTENT: Wrong. The purpose of the proposal should be to seek my permission for you to do the assignments you have selected. The project is what you hope will clarify . . . . ] to clarify the stereotypes that exist about the gay, lesbian, bisexual, and transgender. It analyses the theories the beliefs behind them and the justification given by those for and those against same sex marriages. In this project, you will find two subject matter experts (SME) would than share some of their opinions about this topic, as well as some experience they may have dealt with when it comes to homosexuality. This paper further seeks to explain the history, the development and the changes of same sex marriages from both a social and legal perspective. {This might be too much, too broad for the project.]

Objective and purpose

Many marriages today are heterosexual. And in a country where there are very many religious people and those who are entirely or partially against same sex marriages, the gay, lesbian, bisexual, and transgender face a major challenge in trying to blend with members of society who view homosexuality as abnormal and as a wrong choice. Homosexuals today not only face challenges of monstrous proportion in trying to convince their family, friends, colleagues and society at large but also face the challenge of rejection. This proposal seeks to dig deep into the challenges and clarifies the truth on the existing stereotypes. [All of this is nice and all, but it is not what I need to know in order to know that you understand what you need to do for your senior project.]

Audience

This proposal touches on important issues that affect the modern society and therefore target the every member of modern society. It comes in a language that is simplified in a way that there is no need of technical knowledge to understand the underlying content.