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Moner Alowkar

Professor

Core 110 - story

February 23/2015

Worker Profile Proposal

Name: Ali Alowkar

Age: 34

Job: Business Man

Home town Saudi Arabia

Language: Arabic

Ali Alowkar one member of my family, he inspires me of his work. Ali start his work when he finished high school, and he starts his own business by himself without any help from any one. Ali inspires me because our family were poor and Ali decide to help them. He tried to find job, but he did not find a job, so he starts to buy old car or has crouch and make it a scrap .That mean he bought the car and then salt it as part. Foe example, when the car has crouch people sale it for inexpensive price, but the engine worth more than they sold it. So that how he started his business by himself for a while .when the business develop, he heirs some employer and receive money each month. Our family are so proud of Ali, he helped my family from the poor to rich and I’m thankful today .From his help that I came to here and this is my seconded time to write about him to show the nation how much I love my brother.

Ali inspires a lot of people of his work, because he started to buy old car or car has a crush and make it a scrap .That mean he bought the car and then sold it as part. For example, when the car has crouch people sale it for inexpensive price, but the engine is worth more than they sold it. So that how he started his business by himself for a while .When the business developed, he hire some employer and received money each month. Basically he does not need to work right now he just receive money each month. So now he starting anther business, he creates an electricity generated compound from car engine and generated which is cost around 3000 dollar ;however, the is a generated from the large companies cost more than 50000 dollar .Which does both of the compound does the same thing .So many people want to buy the cheaper price. Now my brother instead of making car engine and generator, he make up a chart which how to make the generator .He send it to China to make the generator in less time, more professionally and of course it cost him less money

. Ali always say nothing is impossible and he can does everything. Of course he got a lot of support from my family and some of his friends. Ali start to fix his own car by himself, even if he does not know what this thing does, he tries to fix it. If he breaks it in the first time he try to learn how to fix it, so next time if he wants to fix the same thing so he knows how to fix. Step by step until he became professional at fixing everything by himself. The most difficult thing that Ali ever had in his business, the English language. He wants to speak English, because he has contracts with many companies and they all connect with me in English .So I let one of my brothers connect, but he wish he can speak that language, because he is busy guy and his brothers are busy too. So some time is difficult to connect with his brothers. The second thing is he became famous so fast, because he work hard and he gives the customers fair price .So many business men jealous because he is more famous than them, so they try to fake issue to make trouble to him. The third thing he wants to point out the employees are very hard to control and maybe he did not have enough education. Maybe he should study a business major to learn how to run the business. Ali develop his business by bringing new stuff and trying to find a new equipment no one has it. Also he tries to find people’s inspiration and bring it to the store. Ali deal with the customers very nicely because he wants make them come to deal with him again. This the most important thing in the business he has to be very nice with the customers, because they are a lot of garages around me people look for the nice fair guy. He does not take advantage of people, he just sell or fix fairly .That how he keeps his customers and make them want to deal with him again.

What does Ali do if you fix a car for a customer and then the customer come back and they are not happy or he talks without respect. Ali try to solve his problem, because it might be a mistake and if the person is talking Ali without respect, he tries to bring him a drink to make him slowdown .That is part of the business all the business men should know that. Ali track a policy with the customers when he wants to sell to the customer for very cheap price almost the original price for the first time, because he wants him to come back again. Ali offer a services with the customers such a guarantee which is very important to the customer .The guarantee include stealing, fire and high quality when he fix. Ali also offer delivery any kind of cars the store. My phone is always on before he open and after he close for the customer, he is available 24/6 for his business. Furthermore, he gives the customer more time if they need question or whatever. In addition he has a new special service now which is he can fix a car for less time for more money. The second new special service which if someone has a problem generated and he can remove from it is place he can send his employees to go and fix it in its place. To explain more the big generated needs to install, so it is hard to remove it and put it back again. If the customer bring his car to fix it sometime the car needs stuff from outside the store, so Ali sends one of my employees to get it, the owner does not need to bring it. When the customer’s car has been fixed Ali calls the customer to come pick up his car. If the customer needs his car fixed and then he does not have anyone to come pick him up, Ali takes the customer back to his home. Now Ali has booking by the phone, so you do not need to wait anymore. In Saudi Arabia nobody has credit card, debit only cash, because it is very expensive, but Ali can do either cash or debit. Sometime people come to fix their car and they expect their car cost just a few hundreds, but it is cost more, so Ali lets them go and bring the rest of the money whenever they can. Ali feels after get married and he has to balance between his family and his business. It is little bit hard for Ail, but his family has one day which is Sunday. He leave to work from 10 in the morning until 12:00 and he goes back at 3:00 afternoon until 6:00 in the evening, and then he spend the rest of the time with them .That is my daily schedule, but the business is mine, he can leave the work anytime he want, also my store is 10 minutes far away from home .As he said before ,he just go there to make sure everything is fine, my job there just checking the employees .To keep his business safe he has to do that every day. How does Ali feels after helping his family and changing his family from poor to rich? Ali Alowkar said “I have an amazing feeling, I cannot explain how do I feel, but thank god I did it and we are having good life. Wishing to everybody the same. Ali did not continue his education, because he does not have enough money, its affect ahis because the education is important in the life. He find if the people do not have a good education they have meaning in this life .The education give the key of the life, when you have that key, you have the life. .In another word the education teach how the world works. When Ali want to tell he father about the business .Ali told his father “Listen, Father, I have an idea I want to make a business .He said, “What kind of business are you going to make”? I told him about what I’m going to do, so he said okay. He helped me little bit, but not all the time because he was working. I was young, but my father gave me all the freedom. A lot of people do not have the freedom in that age. Ali start off his business without money and without any help from anyone. He used to fix his car by himself until he became very good at it. If his friends had a problem with their car he fix their car. By the time he fined himself good with cars and it is fun, he enjoy working in the car. So he decide work as car fixing .He start doing that in front of his home until he made some money. Then he opened a small store until he made more money .Step by step until he became a business man. He so proud of himself .He cannot believe himself but he did it. Ali Alowkar want to send message to people who want to be a business man. If any person want to make his own business, they need to trust themselves. Do not listen to people who try to smash people’s goals because he had a lot of people telling things like “you cannot do it.