outline and paper only for mwasking
245 Interpersonal Communication
Pop-Culture vs. Science Analysis
I. Assignment Overview
A. Students are responsible for turning in: one three-page paper (70 points; described here,
and one preliminary sentence outline thereof (30 points; see Pop-Culture vs. Science:
The Sentence Outline in the Assignments folder.
B. There are many ways of “knowing” what to do or think: personal experience, intuition,
religion, peer opinion, popular advice publications, or scientific research. Of these ways of knowing, only science is predicated on the assumptions that (1) what it thinks might be true (i.e., hypotheses) should be considered false until evidence supports the beliefs, and (2) that everything we think we know today will be corrected over time as we obtain more accurate knowledge than what we currently believe (i.e., progressivism and cumulative thinking). This is your chance to see how scientific claims match, or don’t match, the kinds of claims made by popular press sources of cultural advice. The purpose is to recognize that there are multiple ways of seeking insight into interpersonal communication and relationships, and that science approaches such insights in a different way than popular culture, even if these approaches sometimes come to similar
conclusions.
C. This “Pop-Culture vs. Science Analysis” paper is a 3-page, double-spaced, critical
assessment of interpersonal communication recommendations in popular articles intended for the lay audience. Many people read popular press advice articles and books, for entertainment or information. This assignment allows you to (a) identify such an article, (b) identify a concise piece of advice, (c) formalize that advice into a clear hypothesis or claim, (d) locate a minimum of three scholarly research articles relevant to that advice, and (e) analyze the extent to which that advice is well-founded by scientific research. In the process, you will also be demonstrating your ability to (f) make a compelling and credible argument by linking warrant(s) and research (i.e., “data”) to the proposed claim, and (g) place all of this in a standard written format and style (i.e., American Psychological Association, APA, 6th ed.).
II. Procedural Matters
A. There will be NO MAKEUPS and NO EXTENSIONS for either the outline or the paper regardless of the nature/severity of the situation in which you find yourself. (See the Course Calendar for due dates). Each of the written assignments is due by class time on the date given on the syllabus. Papers submitted at 1-minute past due date time will be considered late, and lowered 10% (a grade level) for each subsequent 24-hour period it is late. This includes holidays, Saturdays, and Sundays. Thus, if a paper is due on Thursday and it is submitted on the following Monday, it is four days late and thus can
achieve a maximum of only 60% of the points available.
B. All papers will be submitted electronically via turnitin.com. Turnitin.com is a web-based program that allows students to submit their papers as .doc or .docx (Microsoft Word), .rtf (rich-text), or .pdf (Portable Document Format) files. The process for uploading documents to turnitin is identical to attaching a file to an email. All written assignments
will be graded through the Grademark interface embedded within turnitin.com.
1. Another one of the features available through turnitin.com is plagiarism detection. ALL WRITTEN WORK SUBMITTED IN COMM 245 WILL BE CHECKED FOR PLAGIARISM. All students are expected to review the Academic Dishonesty Policy of the School of Communication (on the Course Syllabus, in the Assignments folder, and posted on the School of Communication website) and all students are held responsible for complying with this policy. Please note that ignorance of plagiarism policies is not a defense against commission. If one of your written assignments contains material that has been plagiarized, a grade of zero on the assignment is
guaranteed.
2. As a protection from plagiarism, students will be able to turn in their assignments
before the due date, and with 24 hours can return to see how Grademark’s plagiarism detector reports the “similarity” of the submission. Turnitin compares your submitted paper to millions of other submitted papers, as well as published research accessible through the internet and academic search engines. It then computes a similarity between your paper and other searchable papers and publications. There is no absolutely safe percentage of similarity—if your paper only has 10% similarity, but all 10% is in a full sentence that should have quotation marks around it, or that is misattributed, then this 10% is still a serious case of plagiarism. Be sure to allow
enough time for this feedback and any necessary revisions.
C. To access grades and written comments on assignments, students will need to return to the link where they submitted their work and click on the "Grademark" link. Be aware that any reevaluation of a paper opens the entire process of assessment—grades can
increase or decrease as a result.
D. It is your responsibility to account for potential complications with Internet connections and/or the software required to submit your work. The turnitin.com submission process can take as long as five minutes to complete and sometimes it becomes clogged at popular due date times.
III. Substantive Concerns
A. This Pop-Culture vs. Science Analysis assignment is limited to a maximum of three
pages of text.
1. If you go over this limit, the fourth page will not be read and thus you will lose points
for not having that content.
2. The cover page and the reference list, which are REQUIRED, do not count toward
the page total).
B. The paper consists of THREE sections (aside from the introduction and conclusion,
which should be one paragraph each).
1. Pop Summary: In the first section, you should summarize and synthesize the advice in the article you have selected. This portion of the paper should be relatively short -- please DO NOT spend a significant amount of your paper recapping the article you have selected. In the summary and synthesis part, the summary must include clear information related to the popular press advice column. This section should identify only the key points the student wants to critically analyze, and avoid excessive detail, quotations, or attempts to recount the entire article. In short, the summary of the popular press article should be clear, focused, and succinct. (Approximately one
paragraph).
2. Scholarly Summary: In the second section, you should summarize and synthesize at least three scholarly journal articles that investigate the issue(s) in question. Every one of these articles must be from peer-reviewed scholarly journals (see “Scholarly vs. Popular Articles” and “Popular vs Trade vs Scholarly Sources” on Blackboard). The work you include in this section must extend BEYOND the abstract of the article -- you are only required to report the findings of two studies, so the expectation is that you will read and summarize the results in one to two detailed paragraphs. In the summarizing and synthesizing the peer-reviewed research article from a scholarly journal, information should provide just as much detail as is needed for the reader to understand what was done, why, what was found, and what it means in regard to the popular advice article. (Approximately four paragraphs.)
3. Evaluation: In the final section, you should evaluate the quality and truthfulness of the advice you derived from the popular-press advice column you selected and summarized in Section 1 by comparing and contrasting it to the results of the empirical (peer-reviewed, scholarly journal article) studies you summarized in Section 2. Please note that your evaluation will not be comprehensive given that you are evaluating only two studies out of hundreds or thousands that have been written on the topic. You should also note that your evaluation MUST be based on the results and implications from the study summarized in Section 2 of your paper -- although your personal thoughts on relationships are often a valuable source of information that can guide your own relationship experiences, these types of personal reflections and commentaries are NOT appropriate for this assignment. Particular findings from the research results of the scholarly articles must be used as the “data” supporting a clearly articulated warrant (reason) or set of warrants that result in a clearly articulated conclusion or claim indicating whether or not the popular advice column provided reasonable advice, and if not, what was wrong with it or how it should be changed on the basis of the scholarly research. Make clear judgments—was the advice legitimate or not, and why. (Approximately 2-3 paragraphs.)
IV. Examples of Pop-Culture Advice Articles
A. Marriage
1. Cosmo Why Do People Get Married?
http://www.cosmopolitan.com/sex-love/relationship-advice/why-do-people-get-married#slide-1
2. Men’s Health The Benefits of Being Married
http://www.menshealth.com/mhlists/benefits_of_marriage_and_commitment/index.php
3. Redbook Negotiating For a Happy Marriage
http://www.redbookmag.com/love-sex/advice/marriage-contract
B. Flirting
1. Cosmo How to Tell He’s Into You (first meeting)
http://www.cosmopolitan.com/sex-love/body-language/#/category1
2. Telegraph of London: How to Tell if Someone Likes You
3. Rebook Rekindling an Existing Relationship
http://www.redbookmag.com/love-sex/advice/fall-in-love-with-your-husband-again
C. Conversations
1. Cosmo Things You Should Never Discuss With Your Guy
http://www.cosmopolitan.com/sex-love/relationship-advice/how-to-talk-to-a-guy
2. Men’s Health How to Survive Relationship Conversations
http://www.menshealth.com/mhlists/handling_relationship_conversations/index.php
3. Good House How to Reconnect with Your Partner (Understanding Communication Differences)
http://www.goodhousekeeping.com/family/marriage-sex/how-to-connect-with-your-spouse#slide-1
D. Conflict:
1. Men’s Health How to Fight with a Woman
http://www.menshealth.com/mhlists/fighting_strategies/index.php
2. Cosmo How to Fight Fair
http://www.cosmopolitan.com/sex-love/relationship-advice/how-to-fight#slide-1
3. Good Housekeeping How to Stop Common Fights
http://www.goodhousekeeping.com/family/marriage-sex/how-to-stop-arguing
V. Helpful Hints
A. For selecting a topic, you might consider an issue particularly relevant to your own
interpersonal relationships.
B. Try this for a search engine.
1. Go to SDSU library website
2. Click "Databases A-Z”
3. Click "P-R"
4. Click "PsycINFO"
5. Click "Choose Databases"
6. Click "Communication and Mass Communication Complete" and then "OK"
7. Enter any search term(s) you choose into the search box(es) [e.g., marriage benefit], then click "SEARCH"
8. On left, click "scholarly (peer reviewed) journals, then "UPDATE"
C. For more information about research on the Internet, plagiarism and writing skills, the documents below are in the Assignments folder on Blackboard.
1. A Generic Guide for APA Style
2. Academic Dishonesty Policy (Jan 2013)
3. Citing Films and Lectures
4. Common Errors in Undergraduate Writing
5. Evaluating Internet Research Sources (Harris)
6. Evaluating Internet Resources (Georgetown)
7. Helping Students Write
8. Most Common Types of Plagiarism
9. Popular vs. Trade vs. Scholarly Sources
10. Scholarly vs. Popular Articles
VI. General Standards of Evaluation
A. Normally, an “average” (C) paper should meet the following standards:
1. Be complete; does everything that is expected.
2. Conform reasonably to the page limit and other format requirements (APA).
3. Exhibit sound paragraphing: a topic sentence with adequate support.
4. Provide examples and support where required.
5. Use course concepts appropriately.
6. Be reasonably free from grammatical, spelling, and punctuation errors.
7. Submitted on time.
B. The “better than average” (B) paper should meet the preceding criteria and also:
1. Reflect a greater depth of research and thought.
2. Defines communication terms and explains principles.
3. Communication examples are specific, complete, support reasoning, varied.
4. Relationship between communicative behavior and causes or effects clear.
5. Recommendations justified by theory; clear, non-trivial, feasible.
C. The “superior” paper (A) not only meets the foregoing standards but also:
1. Demonstrates understanding of unusually difficult concepts.
2. Integrates concepts and themes as appropriate.
3. Makes an original contribution with creativity and depth of thought.
4. Uses direct quotations and paraphrases as necessary.
5. Contains elements of vividness and special interest in its style.
D. A “below average” (D) paper often has the following errors:
1. Assignment incomplete.
2. Little research.
3. Course terms and concepts not utilized or misunderstood.
4. Lack of examples or support for opinions.
5. Quotations and paraphrases not cited.
6. Stylistic errors interfere with message.
7. Obviously done in haste.
E. The “failing” (F) paper:
1. Reflects several of the problems associated with a D paper.
2. Or it uses fabricated supporting material.
3. Or it distorts course principles.
4. And/or is plagiarized.
VI. Specific Standards of Evaluation
A. The rubric below summarizes the criteria for evaluation of course analysis papers. The rubric presents six criteria, each measured on a 5-point scale, providing a general sense of the quality of the paper in terms of the written descriptions of the levels of
achievement. For a full-size copy of the rubric, see the Assignments folder.
B. The rubric is not a precise measurement tool. For instance, the A range is 90-100%. A paper might receive a 5, but that does not mean it is perfect on that criterion. Few are! Similarly, the “C” range includes a “C-“ as well as a “C+.” Therefore simply computing the numbers does not necessarily provide a fair grade. It is not a formula but
simply a feedback device.
C. Nor does the rubric account for plagiarism, late papers, and other issues. Recall that evidence of plagiarism counts against all of these evaluative standards and thereby jeopardizes all credit. Refer to the policies on academic dishonesty in this syllabus.
VII. General Advice
A. Do NOT leave the assignments until the last minute. Good ideas emerge over time. Too often students say, when completing a paper at the last minute, “Now I see what I could have done if I’d only started earlier.” Also, most cases of plagiarism are not willful, but result from carelessness that is often compounded by rushing to finish an
assignment at the last minute.
B. Allow time for editing. A first draft is not a final draft.
C. Allow for technical problems. Difficulties with your computer or the turnitin.com process are not valid reasons for late papers; nor are stolen computers or misplaced thumb drives. Back up your work continuously in case your computer crashes, your laptop is
stolen, or your professor loses your manuscript (!).
D. Protect your work from others especially if you are sharing computers.
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POP CULTURE VS. SCIENCE ANALYSIS RUBRIC
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Levels of Achievement |
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Criteria |
1: 50-59% (F) |
2: 60-69% (D) |
3: 70-79% (C) |
4: 80-89% (B) |
5: 90-100% (A) |
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TOPICALITY: Content demonstrates relevance to the interpersonal focus of the assignment. Ideas are significant, non-trivial; show depth. Weight 10.00% |
There is no discernible direct or indirect link to the fulfillment of the specified assignment.
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There is a minor or indirect discernible link to the fulfillment of the specified assignment. |
There is a partial direct discernible link to the fulfillment of the specified assignment. |
There is a substantial direct discernible link to the fulfillment of the specified assignment. |
The entire project displays a direct discernible link to the fulfillment of the specified assignment. |
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CLAIMS/ ARGUMENT CONTENT: Demonstrates ability to articulate comprehensive arguments that include relevant and appropriate claims, warrants, and evidence. Weight 30.00% |
Key claims of source(s) not clearly articulated or delineated. Specific reference to passages in the book(s) is not consistently provided, or not provided in sufficient detail or accuracy to test the claims. |
Moderate level of incomplete, vague, or poorly evidenced arguments or claims. |
Some key claims of the source(s) articulated or delineated, but there are some inconsistencies in the detail, gravity, or evidential basis provided in explicating the claims. |
Moderately high level of consistent, coherent, and consistent development of comprehensively formulated arguments in support of primary claims. |
Consistent, coherent, and consistent development of comprehensively formulated arguments in support of primary claims. |
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RESEARCH/DATA CONTENT: Demonstrates ability to locate and appropriately cite recent, relevant, and reasonable scholarly research (books, peer-reviewed journals, current events, reputable internet sources). Does not use textbook. Weight 30.00% |
No directly or peripherally related external sources brought to bear on the validity of the selected claims, &/or those sources applied are distantly relevant to source claims; &/or sources lack recency, relevance, or scholarly imprimatur. |
Moderately low number and quality of location, citation, and listing of recent, relevant, and reasonable scholarly sources for each selected proposition, argument, or claim. |
Studies relevant to some selected propositions, arguments, or claims are lacking, &/or some sources applied are distantly relevant to source claims; &/or sources lack recency, relevance, or scholarly imprimatur. |
Moderately high level of development of sound, articulated, and evidential warrants for each selected proposition, argument, or claim, with high status and appropriate sources. |
Each selected proposition, argument, or claim is warranted and evidenced by sources high in scholarly credibility (i.e., relevance, recency, peer review, etc.). |
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WRITING/ ORGANIZATION: Demonstrates proficiency in organizing ideas, paragraphing, introductions, conclusions, and transitions. Weight 10.00% |
Extensive errors in organizing ideas, paragraphing, introductions, conclusions, and transitions.
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Numerous errors in organizing ideas, paragraphing, introductions, conclusions, and transitions.
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Multiple errors in organizing ideas, paragraphing, introductions, conclusions, and transitions.
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Few errors in organizing ideas, paragraphing, introductions, conclusions, and transitions.
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No errors in organizing ideas, paragraphing, introductions, conclusions, and transitions.
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WRITING/APA: Demonstrates proficiency in APA style guidelines (e.g., paraphrasing citations and quotations; references page). Weight 10.00% |
Extensive errors in APA style. |
Numerous errors in APA style. |
Multiple errors in APA style. |
Few errors in APA style. |
No errors in APA style. |
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WRITING/STYLE: Demonstrates proficiency in sentence construction, grammar, spelling, punctuation & academic voice. Weight 10.00% |
Extensive typos or errors in sentence construction, grammar, spelling, punctuation & academic voice.
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Numerous typos or errors in sentence construction, grammar, spelling, punctuation & academic voice.
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Multiple typos or errors in sentence construction, grammar, spelling, punctuation & academic voice.
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Few typos or errors in sentence construction, grammar, spelling, punctuation & academic voice.
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No typos or errors in sentence construction, grammar, spelling, punctuation & academic voice.
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Pop-Culture vs. Science Analysis: The Full-Sentence Outline
I. Well-organized papers begin with outlines for two reasons.
A. First, outlines make sure the writer is thinking logically.
B. Second, the outline makes your ideas clear to the reader; the reader should be able to recreate the outline from your text (just as you might outline a book chapter).
II. Outlines must conform to standard principles of organization.
A. Separation: Main points (and their sub-points) should be distinct and not overlap.
B. Symmetry [balance]: Main points should have roughly the same amount of information. If they don’t, you may need to (1) drop a point, (2) expand a point, or (3) reorganize the information.
C. Arrangement: A long list of points indicates a lack of abstraction; look for larger categories. Similarly, you cannot have just one subordinate point; that is, every “A” needs a “B,” every “1” needs a “2”, and so forth.
D. Subordination: Sub points should be (1) directly relevant to the main point and
(2) be of a lower level of abstraction.
III. This outline should have the following content.
A. Cover page (see example)
B. Thesis statement, which stands by itself and does not have a roman numeral.
C. Major points, and all (or most) of the sub-points under the major points written in complete sentences.
D. Under the sub-points there may be additional sub-sub-points (also in complete sentences), which would be the evidence that supports lines of reasoning: definitions, examples, quotations, paraphrases, explanations, and so forth. Do not just list topics or ideas; they tell the reader nothing.
E. You must provide a references page in proper APA format. It is not expected that your research would be complete; this is just evidence investigation has begun. More can be added for the final paper.
F. You do not have to provide the introduction, transitions, or conclusion in this outline.
IV. This outline should have the following style.
A. Although there are several formats, use roman numerals. Do not use bullet points!
B. Double-space with one-inch margins.
C. Use page numbers.
C. Use APA style for quotations, paraphrases, and the references page.
V. Criteria for evaluation: See the Sentence Outline Rubric below. For a full-size copy, see the Assignments folder.
VI. There are many resources for outlining on the internet that include basic principles and examples. Among them are:
A. Purdue OWL: Developing an Outline https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/544/03/
B. Harvard University: Outlining http://writingcenter.fas.harvard.edu/pages/outlining
C. Walden University: Outlining a Paper http://writingcenter.waldenu.edu/318.htm
“Lack of confidence, sometimes alternating with unrealistic dreams of heroic success, often leads to procrastination, and many studies suggest that procrastinators are self-handicappers: rather than risk failure, they prefer to create conditions that make success impossible, a reflex that of course creates a vicious cycle.”
Sample Sentence Outline
This is an example from a group interaction class, designed for analyzing a film. Thus it is not a template for this assignment! However, this outline does illustrate deductive reasoning, sentence structure and major principles of outlining (separation, symmetry, arrangement, subordination). Note that communication principles and sub-principles are really topic sentences for paragraphs.
Leadership on the Front Lines: Style is Everything
Thesis: The effectiveness of various leadership styles varies with the situation, as observed in
the management practices manifested in the television program M*A*S*H.
I. Communication Principle: Laissez-faire leadership [give definition with source] works when
the outcome isn’t crucial to group effectiveness. [Source]
A. Sub-Principle: Laissez-faire leadership is effective for social occasions. [Source]
1. Example 1: The staff planned a birthday party without Col. Blake's knowledge.
a. Dialogue or paraphrases from script
b. Impact on events [The party was great.]
2. Example 2: Col Potter assigned Hawkeye and B.J. to be morale officers.
a. Dialogue or paraphrases from script
b. Impact on events [Morale went up].
B. Sub-Principle: Laissez-faire leadership is ineffective for managing personnel matters. [Source]
1. Example 1: Col. Blake ignored Major Hoolihan's complaints about Hawkeye and Trapper John.
a. Dialogue or paraphrases from script
b. Impact on events [Major Hoolihan applied for a transfer.]
2. Example 2: Col Potter listened to Hawkeye's and B.J.'s complaints about Major Burns.
a. Dialogue or paraphrases from script
b. Impact on events [Major Burns let up on them.]
II. Communication Principle: Authoritarian leadership [give definition with source] has a
powerful effect on group dynamics. [Source]
A. Sub-principle: Authoritarian leadership is effective and necessary in crises. [Source]
1. Example 1: When pain medication was not available, Col. Potter ordered the use of placebos.
a. Dialogue or paraphrases from script
b. Impact on events [The patients fell asleep.]
2. Example 2: When the camp was being attacked by a sniper, Col. Blake ordered everyone to stay put.
a. Dialogue or paraphrases from script
b. Impact on events [No one was hurt.]
B. Sub-principle: Authoritarian leadership can lower morale. [Source]
1. Example 1: Major Burns ordered the camp to move across the road "just for practice."
a. Dialogue or paraphrases from script
b. Impact on events [The staff rebelled and became insubordinate.]
2. Example 2: Major Hoolihan would not let a nurse have leave to see her husband.
a. Dialogue or paraphrases from script
b. Impact on events [The nursing staff helped her sneak out, undermining the major's authority.]
III. Communication Principle: Democratic leadership [give definition with source] is effective for managing well-trained personnel. [Source]
A. Sub-principle: Democratic leadership is effective for problem-solving. [Source]
1. Example 1: When a soldier's temperature would not go down, Colonel Potter asked the staff for suggestions.
a. Dialogue or paraphrases from script
b. Impact on events [The temperature went down.]
2. Example 2: When an unexploded missile landed in the compound, Col. Blake called experts from various forces.
a. Dialogue or paraphrases from script
b. Impact on events [Finally he found someone who could defuse the missile.]
B. Sub-principle: Democratic leadership is ineffective in emergencies. [Source]
And so forth...
IV. Recommendations: Therefore, M*A*S*H leaders should expand their repertoire of leadership styles.
A. First, Col. Blake should become less laissez-faire.
1. Example: If he had said,".........," then
2. Effect: Major Hoolihan might not have quit.
B. Second, Major Hoolihan should be more democratic at times.
1. Example: If she had let the nurses set their own schedule, then
2. Effect: The nurse could have seen her husband without sneaking out, and staff would have appreciated Major Hoolihan's compassion.
And so forth....
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Interpersonal Communication Name:___________________________
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POP CULTURE VS. SCIENCE ANALYSIS RUBRIC
Levels of Achievement
Criteria 1: 50-59% (F) 2: 60-69% (D) 3: 70-79% (C) 4: 80-89% (B) 5: 90-100% (A)
TOPICALITY: Content
demonstrates relevance to the interpersonal focus of the assignment. Ideas are significant, non-trivial; show depth. Weight 10.00%
There is no discernible direct or indirect link to the fulfillment of the specified assignment.
There is a minor or indirect discernible link to the fulfillment of the specified assignment.
There is a partial direct discernible link to the fulfillment of the specified assignment.
There is a substantial direct discernible link to the fulfillment of the specified assignment.
The entire project displays a direct discernible link to the fulfillment of the specified assignment.
CLAIMS/ ARGUMENT CONTENT: Demonstrates ability to articulate comprehensive arguments that include relevant and appropriate claims, warrants, and evidence. Weight 30.00%
Key claims of source(s) not clearly articulated or delineated. Specific reference to passages in the book(s) is not consistently provided, or not provided in sufficient detail or accuracy to test the claims.
Moderate level of incomplete, vague, or poorly evidenced arguments or claims.
Some key claims of the source(s) articulated or delineated, but there are some inconsistencies in the detail, gravity, or evidential basis provided in explicating the claims.
Moderately high level of consistent, coherent, and consistent development of comprehensively formulated arguments in support of primary claims.
Consistent, coherent, and consistent development of comprehensively formulated arguments in support of primary claims.
RESEARCH/DATA CONTENT: Demonstrates ability to locate and appropriately cite recent, relevant, and reasonable scholarly research (books, peer-reviewed journals, current events, reputable internet sources). Does not use textbook.
Weight 30.00%
No directly or peripherally related external sources brought to bear on the validity of the selected claims, &/or those sources applied are distantly relevant to source claims; &/or sources lack recency, relevance, or scholarly imprimatur.
Moderately low number and quality of location, citation, and listing of recent, relevant, and reasonable scholarly sources for each selected proposition, argument, or claim.
Studies relevant to some selected propositions, arguments, or claims are lacking, &/or some sources applied are distantly relevant to source claims; &/or sources lack recency, relevance, or scholarly imprimatur.
Moderately high level of development of sound, articulated, and evidential warrants for each selected proposition, argument, or claim, with high status and appropriate sources.
Each selected proposition, argument, or claim is warranted and evidenced by sources high in scholarly credibility (i.e., relevance, recency, peer review, etc.).
WRITING/ ORGANIZATION: Demonstrates proficiency in organizing ideas, paragraphing, introductions, conclusions, and transitions.
Weight 10.00%
Extensive errors in organizing ideas, paragraphing, introductions, conclusions, and transitions.
Numerous errors in organizing ideas, paragraphing, introductions, conclusions, and transitions.
Multiple errors in organizing ideas, paragraphing, introductions, conclusions, and transitions.
Few errors in organizing ideas, paragraphing, introductions, conclusions, and transitions.
No errors in organizing ideas, paragraphing, introductions, conclusions, and transitions.
WRITING/APA: Demonstrates proficiency in APA style guidelines (e.g., paraphrasing citations and quotations; references page).
Weight 10.00%
Extensive errors in APA style.
Numerous errors in APA style.
Multiple errors in APA style.
Few errors in APA style.
No errors in APA style.
WRITING/STYLE: Demonstrates proficiency in sentence construction, grammar, spelling, punctuation & academic voice.
Weight 10.00%
Extensive typos or errors in sentence construction, grammar, spelling, punctuation & academic voice.
Numerous typos or errors in sentence construction, grammar, spelling, punctuation & academic voice.
Multiple typos or errors in sentence construction, grammar, spelling, punctuation & academic voice.
Few typos or errors in sentence construction, grammar, spelling, punctuation & academic voice.
No typos or errors in sentence construction, grammar, spelling, punctuation & academic voice.
Interpersonal Communication Name: _____________________________
SENTENCE OUTLINE RUBRIC
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Levels of Achievement
Criteria 1: 50-59% (F) 2: 60-69% (D) 3: 70-79% (C) 4: 80-89% (B) 5: 90-100% (A)
TOPICALITY: Content (1) demonstrates relevance to the Interpersonal focus of the assignment. Ideas significant, show depth, are non-trivial. Weight 10.00%
There is no discernible direct or indirect link to the fulfillment of the specified assignment.
There is a minor or indirect discernible link to the fulfillment of the specified assignment.
There is a partial direct discernible link to the fulfillment of the specified assignment.
There is a direct discernible link to the fulfillment of the specified assignment.
The entire project displays a direct discernible link to the fulfillment of the specified assignment.
THESIS STATEMENT: (2) Demonstrates ability to construct clear, specific single sentence that defines scope and forecasts main points Weight 8.00%
Meets no criteria for a high quality statement.
Meets few criteria for a high quality statement.
Meets some criteria for a high quality statement.
Meets most criteria for a high quality statement.
Meets all criteria for a high quality statement.
RESEARCH/DATA CONTENT: (3) Demonstrates ability to locate and appropriately cite recent, relevant, and reasonable scholarly research (books, peer-reviewed journals, current events, reputable internet sources). Does not use textbook. Quantity appropriate for this point in time only. Weight 20.00%
Insufficient or peripherally related external sources support propositions, arguments, or claims, &/or those sources applied are distantly relevant; &/or sources lack recency, relevance, or scholarly imprimatur.
Moderately low number and quality of location, citation, and listing of recent, relevant, and reasonable scholarly sources relevant to each proposition, argument, or claim.
At least 1 to 2 studies relevant to each proposition, argument, or claim are provided, &/or some sources are high in scholarly credibility (i.e., relevance, recency, peer review, etc.).
Most major propositions, arguments, or claim have sufficient number of sources high in scholarly credibility (i.e., relevance, recency, peer review, etc.).
Each major proposition, argument, or claim has sufficient number of sources high in scholarly credibility (i.e., relevance, recency, peer review, etc.).
OUTLINE SEPARATION: (4) Demonstrates ability to organize information such that main points and subpoints are separate and distinct Weight 8.00%
No main points and subpoints are separate and distinct or insufficient information provided to tell.
Few main points and subpoints are separate and distinct.
Some main points and subpoints are separate and distinct.
Most main points and subpoints are separate and distinct.
All main points and subpoints are separate and distinct.
OUTLINE SUBORDINATION: (5) Demonstrates ability to organize information such that each major point is directly related to the thesis and that each subpoint relates directly to the major point above Weight 8.00%
Hardly any major points are directly related to the thesis and/or hardly subpoints relate directly to the major point above.
Few major points are directly related to the thesis and all subpoints relate directly to the major point above.
Some major points are directly related to the thesis and all subpoints relate directly to the major point above.
All but one point are directly related to the thesis and all but one subpoints relate directly to the major point above.
All major points are directly related to the thesis and all subpoints relate directly to the major point above.
OUTLINE SYMMETRY (6) (BALANCE): Demonstrates ability to organize information such that major points and subpoints within them have similar quantity Weight 8.00%
No major and sub-points are balanced.
Few major and sub- points are balanced.
Some major and sub- points are balanced.
Only 1 or 2 major and sub-points are unbalanced.
All major and sub- points are balanced.
OUTLINE ARRANGEMENT: (7) Demonstrates ability to organize information such that content is organized in a coherent way Weight 8.00%
No pattern discerned or just a list of ideas.
Poorly organized. Arrangement needs some major revisions.
Arrangement needs few revisions.
Arrangement of ideas coherent, clear, logical.
SENTENCE CONSTRUCTION: (8) Demonstrates proficiency in sentence construction and coherence (transitions, sections/section heads) Weight 10.00%
Extensive errors in sentence construction and coherence.
Numerous errors in sentence construction and coherence.
Multiple errors in sentence construction and coherence.
Only 1 or 2 errors in sentence construction and coherence.
No errors in sentence construction and coherence.
WRITING/APA: Demonstrates (9) proficiency in APA style guidelines (e.g., citations and quotations; references page). Weight 10.00%
Extensive errors in APA style.
Numerous errors in APA style.
Multiple errors in APA style.
Only 1 or 2 errors in APA style.
No errors in APA style.
WRITING/STYLE: Demonstrates proficiency in outlining notation, grammar, spelling, punctuation & academic voice. Weight 10.00% (10)
Extensive typos, grammatical, punctuation, and spelling errors or errors in outlining notation.
Numerous typos, grammatical, punctuation and spelling errors or errors in outlining notation.
Multiple typos, grammatical, punctuation and spelling errors or errors in outlining notation.
Only 1 or 2 grammatical, punctuation, and spelling errors or errors in outlining notation.
No typos, grammatical, punctuation, or spelling errors follows outlining notation.