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THEODORE DREISER.docx
THEODORE DREISER
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One of America’s great literary naturalists, Theodore Dreiser (1871– 1945) turns his lens here, in a 1919 newspaper article, on the Standard Oil works in Bayonne, New Jersey. The result is a classic description of American industrial squalor and an early, albeit pessimistic, sounding of themes later addressed by the environmental justice movement. It is easy to fault Dreiser for his sense that these workers were of a less feeling, “not very attractive” order; we could also fault ourselves and face up to our current willingness to move dirty and dangerous occupations like these out of sight, to the sweatshops of Bangladesh or the coastal plain of China, for instance. A Certain Oil Refinery There is a section of land very near New York, lying at the extreme southern point of the peninsula known as Bayonne, which is given up to a peculiar business. The peninsula is a long neck of land lying between those two large bays, which extend a goodly distance on either hand, one toward the city of Newark, the other toward the vast and restless ocean beyond Brooklyn. Stormy winds sweep over it at many periods of the year. The seagull and the tern fly high over its darksome roof-tops. Tall stacks and bare, red buildings and scores of rounded tanks spread helter-skelter over its surface, give it a dreary, unkempt and yet not wholly inartistic appearance which appeals, much as a grotesque deformity appeals or a masque intended to represent pain. This section is the seat of a most prosperous manufacturing establishment, a single limb of a many-branched tree, and its business is the manufacturing, or rather refining, of oil. Of an ordinary business day you would not want a more inspiring picture of that which is known as 186 The Library of America • Story of the Week Excerpt from American Earth: Environmental Writing Since Thoreau (The Library of America, 2008), pages 186–191. First published as “The Standard Oil Works at Bayonne,” New York Call (March 16, 1919). Reprinted in The Color of a Great City (1923). manufacture. Great ships, inbound and outbound, from all ports of the world, lie anchored at its docks. Long trains of oil cars are backed in on many spurs of tracks, which branch from main-line arteries and stand like caravans of steel, waiting to carry new burdens of oil to the uttermost parts of the land. There are many buildings and outhouses of all shapes and dimensions which are continually belching forth smoke in a solid mass, and if you stand and look in any direction on a gloomy day you may see red fires which burn and gleam in a steady way, giving a touch of somber richness to a scene which is otherwise only a mass of black and gray.
1102 F 14 RA Worksheet.docx
English 1102: Rhetorical Analysis Worksheet
Instructions: Use the following outline to organize your rhetorical analysis. Be as specific as possible with your examples. Indicate page numbers! If you use a direct quotation, be sure to practice proper MLA in-text citation.
I. Summary of the essay
A. Attribution
1. Author’s name
2. Genre/medium
II. Claims
A. Main claim (write this out in one or two sentences)
_____________________________________________________________________
1. Type of claim(s): _______________________________________________
II. Purpose/Audience
A. Purpose
1. Specific example from text to support: ______________________________
B. Audience
1. Demographics: _________________________________________________
2. Specific example: _______________________________________________
IV. Support Strategies
A. Evidence
1. Testimony: ____________________________________________________
2. Authority: _____________________________________________________
3. Facts: _________________________________________________________
4. Statistics: _______________________________________________________
B. Examples
1. Anecdotes: _____________________________________________________
2. Allusions: ______________________________________________________
3. Scenario: _______________________________________________________
4. Illustration: _____________________________________________________
C. Appeals
1. Emotion: _______________________________________________________
2. Need: __________________________________________________________
3. Value: __________________________________________________________
4. Logic: __________________________________________________________
5. Character: _______________________________________________________
V. Conclusion
A. Summary of your rhetorical analysis