revising essay

People must have at least one unforgettable thing in life. It was the first year when I came to America. My friend wanted to buy a used car for daily life. It was very interesting for us to negotiate with foreign dealer so my most unforgettable experience was buying a car with my friend.

There was no doubt that saving gas is one of the most important topics for car market. It was evident that when two gentlemen approaching a car yard are keen on capturing the sense of the flourishing business. “That is a new model of a car which can be suitable for family use,” my friend shouted as he pointed at the vehicle. “Definitely, I do agree with you.” I replied. It is evident that the individual where really approaching towards their target of completing their mission of searching a car. All over a sudden, another car dashed in from the left side of the yard, it was definitely gate B that is considered to be the entrance of the new arrivals.

“I am really confused, it seems I made a wrong choice,” said my friend as he enters the yard. “It seems there is more advanced and fuel efficient vehicle hidden in here.” He added as he made his way to the go down. The seller was quite overwhelmed by the nature of the clients since they appear to have made a bang into the yard with an option of winning their heart a given model of Toyota vehicle. “How much do you sell the Toyota Prince model standing right in front of the gate?” I asked. The seller was shocked since the two gentlemen had missed to greet him. “Good morning gentlemen, how may I help you?” the seller suggested with a smile. “Oops, sorry good morning, we are interested in the prices of the mentioned brand."

After a while, the seller dashed out and came back with a huge-bellied gently man. “Good Moring gentlemen, how can I help you?” asked Thomas, who is in charge of the sales and purchases. “We would like to make some purchases this afternoon, how much you sell the black Toyota Prince vehicle.” inquired my friend who was now frightened. In a quick response, “$2000 Sir.” The message was a bang in the heads of my friend and me and it cost some minute of consultations. The process led to a short discussion between us. “What is your opinion on the prices? ” I asked. “No worries my friend, I just received my promotion scheme and I am willing to pay $1500.” Replied by my friend. I walked back to Thomas and presented the mentioned prices. “We can afford only $1500.” I said.

Quickly, Thomas got into the offices and consulted with the rest to the staff. After a while, Thomas emerged with a relieved face that indicate there can be a deal only when the two gentlemen yield their grounds. “Ok, let make another deal gentlemen,” suggested Thomas who was now full of confidence. “I believe you have been amazed by the ability of saving gas of the vehicle with the ability to accommodate five passengers.” added Thomas who was actually jovial.

My friend appeared relieved and quickly decided to take a step towards Thomas from the right side where the car had been parked. “Mmm … I have decided to add $200 to the previous mentions amount Sir?” suggested my friend who was now sweating on his nose. “Listen, gentlemen, I believed I have done the best deal ever but you happen to down my patients.” Replied Thomas who appeared to have been provoked. We had to hold on to our nerves in order to ensure a successful deal is reached without many problems. “Let has pay you $1800 as our final amount.” My friend responded with his eyes wide open sending Thomas to a short shiver. “Deal! ” smile Thomas and gets the car key from the office. “The deal is done and let head to the bank as we do a road test for the vehicle.” He added that felt happy of saving $200 of our money. Vroom!! Vroom!! The dashed out of the yard with the car.