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teachers_comments.docx+Please see attached paper for full comments.
Thank you for submitting your u2a1 Revision 2. You still did not address all of the questions in the directions as follows:
Find a peer-reviewed research study that addresses the theory or treatment of phobias that was published after 1990. Summarize the methods used and the conclusions made, and describe the key aspects of the research that reflect behaviorist principles
You need to include a clear introduction as well. Remember, the introductory paragraph should introduce the problem and tell readers what you plan to present in the body of your paper. Subsequent paragraphs should follow the same form, introductory statement, evidence to support a logical flow of ideas related to that statement leading to a concluding statement that provides a segue into the next main idea. Before presenting recommendations, you must summarize the evidence, tying it to facts presented in your report with citations of sources. Conclusions should follow so that you make it absolutely clear to readers what important evidence and main ideas you want them to carry with them into your recommendations. Without a clear summary and conclusion, readers will have no clear idea what you are talking about and will be left to their own imagination.
Turnitin indicated that your paper has a 5% match for plagiarism – nice job! You do need to be sure to answer all questions clearly and completely.
Be sure to only use proper sources, like those found in our online databases and peer reviewed journals. This assignment asked to “find a peer-reviewed research study that addresses the theory or treatment of phobias that was published after 1990. Summarize the methods used and the conclusions made, and describe the key aspects of the research that reflect behaviorist principles.” You did not include any peer reviewed study.
You had some errors in APA formatting. I recommend that you contact your coach and your tutor to help you as you edit your paper and locate proper sources. You will want to use all of our resources, Smarthinking, the writing center and iGuide APA resources.
I look forward to reading your future papers!
Dr. Gilston
Apply knowledge of theory and research in learning and cognition to inform personal behavior, professional goals, and values in order to understand social pCRITERION:
Apply behaviorist theory and research to personal learning experiences.
Basic
Attempts to apply behaviorist theory and research to personal learning experiences but the application is incomplete or inappropriate to the situation.
Faculty Comments:
“You did apply behaviorist theory and research to personal learning experiences. Please see attached paper for full comments.”
oleicCRITERION:
Describe aspects of a scholarly research article that reflects behaviorist principles.
Non-Performance
Does not identify aspects of a scholarly research article that reflects behaviorist principles.
Faculty Comments:
“You did not describe aspects of a scholarly research article that reflects behaviorist principles and supports conclusions with a strong rationale. Please see attached paper for full comments.”
CRITERION:
Analyze how behaviorism is relevant today.
Basic
Describes how behaviorism is relevant today but provides little or no analysis.
Faculty Comments:
“ You did describe how behaviorism is relevant today. Please see attaché
describe aspects of a scholarly research article that reflects behaviorist principles.
Non-Performance
Does not identify aspects of a scholarly research article that reflects behaviorist principles.
Faculty Comments:
“You did not identify aspects of a scholarly research article that reflects behaviorist principles and supports conclusions with a strong rationale. Please see attached paper for full comments. ”d paper for full comments. ”.
