ENGLISH ESSAY

Final essay by Joseph Gugino

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FINAL GRADE

100/200 Final essay GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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Comment 1 T he essay needs a better structure to f o cus o n ef f ects and better language. T he wo rd "yo u" damages the essay and the sentence structure needs much revising. It so metimes interf eres with clarity.

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Comment 2 this is no t an ef f ect o n yo u. What was the ef f ect o f gro wing up in this place?

Comment 3 the wo rd "po sitive' is no t a no un. T his is spo ken language

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