Need help with project risk assessment assignment

BELOW ARE MY PROJECT SUBMISSION COMMENTS THAT NEEDS TO BE

FIXED, PLEASE HELP.

Total points earned (rounded): 55 out of 150 (37%). Task Requirements

points earned: 15 out of 37.5

(40%). Demonstration and application of knowledge points earned: 24.75 out of 82.5 (30%). Academic

writing and format points earned: 15 out of 30 (50%). Strengths: Good work on IP4! Opportunities for

improvement: Monitoring an

d Controlling sections could be further developed and detailed for IP 5.

Additional Comments: This week you were to provide a detailed description of the monitoring process

included reporting or monitoring techniques, including the cost and schedule. In ad

dition you should

have included a detailed description of the control process that has steps that cover from when the risk

is discovered through resolution or mitigation. And a diagram that depicts these control steps. I look

forward to your last submissio

n. If you fix this paper, please contact me and I will regrade it.

BELOW ARE MY PROJECT SUBMISSION COMMENTS THAT NEEDS TO BE FIXED, PLEASE HELP.

Total points earned (rounded): 55 out of 150 (37%). Task Requirements points earned: 15 out of 37.5

(40%). Demonstration and application of knowledge points earned: 24.75 out of 82.5 (30%). Academic

writing and format points earned: 15 out of 30 (50%). Strengths: Good work on IP4! Opportunities for

improvement: Monitoring and Controlling sections could be further developed and detailed for IP 5.

Additional Comments: This week you were to provide a detailed description of the monitoring process

included reporting or monitoring techniques, including the cost and schedule. In addition you should

have included a detailed description of the control process that has steps that cover from when the risk

is discovered through resolution or mitigation. And a diagram that depicts these control steps. I look

forward to your last submission. If you fix this paper, please contact me and I will regrade it.