refliction

Draft sharing

When I shared my draft to the class, I liked the idea, it was new for me and I was fread that people See my essay. Well, I belief that it is a good idea to show my paper to more than one because every one see things deffrent from other. When students saw my paper they fix my paper some gave me passtve coomeants and other gave me negative commeants.I took their commeant and I fix it and I made it better.I learnd form it and if some one stop u and tell u that is not correat and fix it I think it won’t be forgetble. On other hande, When I used to give commeant to my classmate it did help me too. I try to not make the same miske they did, and I learnd for my classmate so much things. I Also belief that it's easier to actually fix a paper and make it the way you want it when you have someone else look at it and tell you everything that they think you need to change. Sometimes being the writer it's easy to overlook things in your own paper.