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According to the author, the education system especially in secondary school is wanting. The article discusses at large how the education system has become so stagnant in ethics. The author asserts that teenagers in high school have hectic behaviors that angers adults in the society. It is hard to understand how a teenage student will transport a gun to classrooms and shoot his/her fellow students. The author has developed the article by an excellent structure which supports his argument. He introduces us to the history of education system in the country and continues to address issue that has accumulatively resulted to the episodes we experience day by day. For a long time, it has way for modern schooling processes and practices. Public institutions practices same old ethics been noted and suspected that America high school is outdated and should be stopped to cover in the syllabus. The event of Littleton team sport dominates more than the schools culture shooting brought about these issues. Student has come up with stories about incidents and the results of the insider and outsiders of the popularity, sports and .competence. Team sport dominates more than the schools culture. This is because high school system is based on the extent which team succeeds. High school administrations who are former coaches place themselves in untouchable category.

No other group of adult young or old is confined to an age segregated environment even in work place is there such a narrow segmentation by chronology.

By the time those who graduates from high school continue to college and start to realize themselves and what is really become an adult by that time so many opportunities have been lost and also much time has been wasted without their notice while those in senior and junior years mark time as they wait for college to begin They have tough moment of partial attention since they lack confidence to life after high school could have different meaning to them except what they already believe to be real. We should look this as biological and cultural facts and not extend the life of a faulty institution that is outdated. The author depicts that high school in America is divided into two phases which is middle and upper. The features of American schools are the right of way given to sports, organizations and activities by the community, the schools the parents and the scholars themselves.

Supplementary activities are educational activities not falling within the series of the regular program which the school supervises. It is also expensive in cost for the edition and also requires a lot of time spent in education. College education after high school is also the cost of the process. In education and learning, it cams extremely hard when it came s into high school in modern America; victory of puberty masquerading as popular culture and the tyranny of peer groups based on ludicrous values meet little resistance. After high school one cannot be employed fully due to poor quality of recruitment and training for high school teachers. The outsider may have the advantage in you because has the experience plus he has the money advantage over the insider. Another way we can improve the education standards in high school is to change the model used to recruit high school teachers. Employment platform and class work does not auger well since it a curriculum versus an enterprise.

The article is dedicated to every stakeholder in education. The main aim of education is to instill knowledge in a student at the right level, high school education system in the U.S. has been faced with social problems where some student feel so special than other. Discrimination among teachers and students affects the performance of some students. Such malpractice that involves drug abuse and background complications changes the main course of education. Today, high school rules have been interrelated with life rules where a student can be treated as a male due to the kind of crime he/she perpetrates. It was decided after several instances of criminal activities in high school. Many teachers are not qualified but they can influence education employment boards through corruption. The system of hosting students in dormitories is the sole confinement of young adults where they are hipped up like a gang. Students of same age groups therefore get a chance to create their own world. The author asserts that many students’ faces challenges in adapting the new exposed life in colleges. It is therefore important to let go old practices in high school education.

Work cited

Botstein, L. (1999). Let Teen-Angers Adulthood, The New York Time. 4(621)