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Scholarship Essay

Hello I am Anna Rodriguez and I can't even explain how I felt when I heard that I was nominated to win a $500.00 scholarship. The first time I have scholarship was last year. Since I play the violin I got to perform for the fifth grade graduation. It would be a honor if I was one of the three winners because if I do win the scholarship I can get into a good college which can help me achieve my goal of becoming a doctor when I am older. If you continue reading you will read about what I would say to future students planning to attend P.S.506, you will also see what college means to me and what leadership qualities I will need in order to continue my educational career. Lastly you will learn about what this scholarship means to me.

As I said earlier the first thing you will be reading about is what I would say to future students planning to attend P.S.506. If I had the chance to talk to future students I would say that the teachers here are the best. They notice if something is going on like if you are acting strange or unusual, and the teachers here make sure that you are never left behind, and even if you fall behind even just a little bit they will do all that they can to help you catch up, and remember they are doing the best that they can to help you later on in life. But the teachers are not the things here that will help you on later in life, the programs here also help you later on the life. For example the leader in me program helps bring out the leader in you. Another example is the penny harvest committee. The penny harvest committee collects money from the school and picks 2 or 3 organizations with a good cause, and I should know because I am part of the penny harvest. This organization helps you in real life because like the leader in me program it helps you become a leader because you are helping people around your community. Continue reading in order to find out what college means to me and the leadership qualities I will need in order to continue my educational career and what this scholarship means to me.

As stated earlier now you will be learning about what college means to me so let's get started. College is a big deal in my life because my dream is to become a doctor or a lawyer, and college will help me achieve my career. Before I go on to tell you about what leadership qualities I need in order to continue my educational career I want to say why I want to become a doctor or lawyer. I want to be a doctor because I will be able to help people who need medical help. But I don't want to be one of those doctors that you go to for checkups I want to be surgeon. But if I end up with a job in the court room it's because I am also helping people, and I think I would be a good defense attorney. One time my mom made my brother and I sign to a contract that had a list of stuff that my brother and I had to do before she came home from work. But it also stated at the end that if none of the work is we have to do 100 pushups. But I found a loophole in the contract and we called a family court. I said that we did do some of the work that was listed and the contract stated if none of the work was done than we will have to face the consequences, so after the court ended and I was proven innocent. The leadership qualities I would need to in order to continue my educational career would be determination, perseverance, I will need to be proactive synergize put first things first and basically I would need to follow all of the seven habits. I would need to be determined because if I get stumped I can't just give up I would need to be determined and do the best that I can, same thing for perseverance. I would need to be proactive because I shouldn't do nice things just because someone is watching. I don't want to waste your time going on about all seven habits and how each one would help me continue my educational career because we all know how the seven habits helps you become a leader. Continue reading in order to find out what this scholarship means to me.

As I stated earlier you will be reading about what this scholarship means to me. This scholarship means the world to me because as I said earlier the scholarship can help me achieve my dreams of becoming a doctor or lawyer, because I can't just become a doctor without an education after school. So in order to become a doctor or a lawyer I will need to go to college.