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1-I chose to write about this movie because I felt that I can write about it and because it’s one of the best romantic movies that I watched.

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2-The story is about happily married newlyweds of a guy is called Leo and girl called Paige.

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3-When Paige awakes, she has severe memory loss, and she couldn’t remember Leo.

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4-One of the important things that I have learned is to do whatever it takes to achieve the life that I want with the people that I love even if life chose not to let me have it an ideal way.

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5-In my perspective, I chose this movie because it gives me faith, strength my will against all hurdles that I will face to achieve what I want.

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