Fix grammar and add vocabulary

Short Response 4

My commercial paper was well done for several reasons, but the most important reason that there is 2 week which more than enough to complete the paper with strong vocabulary words and grammar. The first time when I saw the commercial before 2 weeks, it was difficult to analysis where there is not lot of conversation in the “The Guardian- The Three Pigs” commercial it is only between 2 minutes and the teacher want at least 3 pages. Before spring break starts, the teacher make it more understandable were she put a day where to clear all the things which they were hard to understand and made for as the way much is to start our paper in well organized. The most difficult part in the paper was to do the right order for Logos, Ethos, and Pathos because it was the first time to work on those new techniques. The paper after the introduction started roughly were to write in order for Logos, Ethos, and Pathos, so it was hard to focus in which part to started because if I started I can’t change the order again to fix the paper. The logos part went easy with me, so I started with it because I liked to talk about the logic and reason for what was happened in the commercial. In the Ethos part went hard to write because it was my weakness. Pathos was ok with me were to talk about the emotions of audience which they where in the commercial.