Language Log #4
1) Incorrect sentence: The first time I viewed the commercial two weeks earlier I found it quite tasking to analyze.
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2) Incorrect sentence: I guess it’s because there is not much conversing in that, “The Guardian- the Three Pigs” commercial.
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3) Incorrect sentence: It’s only about two minutes long and the teacher wanted at least 3 pages on it.
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4) Incorrect sentence: Therefore focusing on which part to start was challenging because I needed to avoid re-fixing the paper after writing it.
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5) Incorrect sentence: Pathos was a much easier walk since it merely involved discussing the emotions of the audience in the commercial.
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