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The positive aspects of fast food Comment by Abigail Lambke: Capitalize all important words

In the global Realization article, I agree that now that fast food is one of the most commented thing all over the world. Just two decades ago our food habits was were different. People used to make their food in their house offer that several of fast food chain such as McDonalds, KFC, and Taco Bell, they started to make ready food for people. After passing time people become used to eat fact food instead of homemade food. For different age grebe they have different kinds of meals plan such as for kid’s happy meals. Also they have heavy meals and breakfast food. Now people can save their time as they don’t need to cook their food by themselves. From my personal experience when I remain busy with my study and assessments I used to go to MacDonald. Thus I can save my time briefer fast food because it is convent and health valve is good. On the other hand the economic values of fast food is also helpful for the world economy. Fast food chain like KFC, McDonalds are earning billing of dollars per year. Thousands of people are working in thousand restaurant for example McDonald is the biggest private employer in Brazil private. As McDonald KFC, and other fast food companies have a lot of restaurants all around the world they need people all those positions thus fast food industry helps both national and international economy. The another positive aspect of fast food industry spatially for American is that people out to the USA now can come to know American food stile style by these they can expand American they can expand American culture either. Some ecumenist economist argues that this fast food industry has best in pact on international business. If we in our day to day live observe that we will find some real change for fast food especially in cities areas all around the world. Comment by Abigail Lambke: The chapter name should be in quotation marks, not italicized Comment by Abigail Lambke: Incorrect word – not sure what you mean here Comment by Abigail Lambke: Not sure what you mean here Comment by Abigail Lambke: Confusing word placement Comment by Abigail Lambke: Your point here is unclear Comment by Abigail Lambke: At some point in this summary, you need to name the author and the book this comes from. You must cite your sources!

Negatives sides of fast food Comment by Abigail Lambke: Capitalize all important words

Facet food very familiar food times for all over the world we know that the main reason behind this familiarity of fast food. In discussions of spreading fast food, one controversial issue has been around the world. On the one hand, doctors argues that fast food has negatives affect for people contends contending some resent studies show a big number of people who are suffering of fast food .Others even maintain that people got some health issues in the past. My own view is fast food has so many negatives effect on our health. Side by side it has some negative affects not any in our to lad healthy life we need to eat balanced food with enough vegetables, protein, carbohydrates, and less salt but maximum fast food its full with cheese and chemicals such as soya sues with salty items. These items are not good for our healt.it creates ability. Want attack and others fat disease. For these things people any getting ill even in early age.as we agree with doctors and health specialist that obesity has a longer bad impact on health which may create fatal disses in future it also reduces work output. Another bad fast food industry is on local agriculture business. As people start to eat in fast food shops they don’t rely on local agriculture food if meal for their surviving. Thus it harms the former and business men. The agriculture from some people view points is that after coming fast food items so much that they are totally habited that they have forget how to cook meals in their homes. Lastly we can assert that on an average fast food as not good neither for health nor for long run economy. As in fast food the amount of calories are so much but nutrition is so less that why our body suffer. For in balance food items but we must eat balance food regularly to lead a healthy live. Comment by Abigail Lambke: What? This does not make sense Comment by Abigail Lambke: Of what? Comment by Abigail Lambke: Side by side with what? Confusing Comment by Abigail Lambke: Not sure what you mean here Comment by Abigail Lambke: Not sure what you mean here Comment by Abigail Lambke: Sentence fragement. Confusing Comment by Abigail Lambke: Again, you need to explain where you take this information from. These are general arguments that should be more connected with Scholosser’s chapter.