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Plastic surgery is a personal choice that many people do in order to improve their appearance. It has always been a technique and a technology driven surgical discipline, this is because there is no regional anatomic focus. With the current developments in technology, the field of medicine has also benefited immensely. Technology has changed the way patients are handled in hospitals. Every aspect of medicine raging from neuroscience, to dermatology and other branches of medicine have been affected by technological advancements. In particular, dermatology that deals with plastic surgery has benefited from the technology developments. So, ho have the different forms of technology improved medical care in plastic surgery? Comment by Dr. Naser: Try to focus and shorten your thesis statement. Focus on what the paper will be about! You may want to shorten it a little to transition to your document smoothly.
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In today’s life it’s more accessible and individualized, several technology and materials has emerged during the years. Improvement in the medical field has highly benefited cosmetic surgery world. Use of endoscope in facial rejuvenation is one of the most advancement in plastic surgery. An endoscope is a machine with a very small camera which is inserted through a tiny cut in the skin and the views of the underlying body tissues are transmitted on the TV screen (Steed, 1995).
The use of radiofrequency is the latest innovation in surgical field, radiofrequency is used to create softer and smoother tissue and remove damaged tissues in the body. In addition to that, tumescent technology advancement of liposuction has completely altered the way people reduce adipose fat tissues over their body. In relation to this method plastic surgeons distend the softer tissues and the fat with local anesthesia and through this way blood loss has been reduced a lot in comparison with the traditional techniques of liposuction. This type of technology is able to produce great results though an incision in the patient’s body, fat removal is achieved by a small laser fiber that inserted in this tiny incision (Mustoe, 1999).
Technology has affected plastic surgery through laser techniques; the new application of lasers is in skin resurfacing, carbon dioxide lasers are also being used in plastic surgery by some of the plastic surgeons. Use of laser can be effectively minimized with less tissue distraction. Lasers can be applied in many areas such as tattoo removal, treating red vascular lesion and many other areas. Skin graft is another technique that is also used in plastic surgery, this can be used to replace or to cover skin which is missing or that has been damaged due to age or some other reasons. Skin grafting is the process whereby skin is removed from one part of the body so as to restore another part of the body.
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II. Skin Grafting
a. Where it came from
b. What it’s used for
III. Laser technology
a. How it is used in modern plastic surgery and medicine
b. Removing tattoos
c. Removing Scares
d. Resurfacing skin
e. Hyperpigmentation
IV. Endoscope
a. How is it used in plastic surgery?
b. Where did it originate?
V. Fat grafting
a. Breast
b. Lips
c. Wrinkles
VI. Electronics
a. Photo imagery software
b. Digital photography
c. Email
d. Electronic Scheduling
e. Physician Websites
VII. Conclusion
In conclusion we can say plastic surgery has been a technique, which has been driven by technology with no regional autonomic focus, and advancement in technology has made it more popular and even safer. In each and every new material introduced, technology is constantly tested and approved so as to ensure safety and accessibility for the people. Comment by Dr. Naser:
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Works Cited
Mustoe, T. (1999). STATUS FOR GROWTH FACTORS AND DEVICES IN WOUND HEALING. CONTINENCE NURSES MEETING. MINNEAPOLIS.
Steed, D. (1995). clinical evaluationof recombinant human plated-derived growth factor for the treatment of lower extreemitydiabetic ulcers. J Vasc Surg., 2171-2178.
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