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Hi everyone, today I will introduce my partner. My partner has a beautiful name Angel. And it is also his father’s name. He came from a small town Sumner. When I first heard this name, I said, what? You’re born in a summer? He said no, is Sumner. Whatever, I still think he is born in a summer. So I found an interesting thing is his favorite animal is polar bear. They all full of power, and like to play outside. But in my mind, he is totally unlike a polar bear. Because everyone knows that polar bear has white, thick, soft fur. ENNNN, He doesn't look like that.

Also, polar bear is a kind of lazy animal. That doesn't fit angel’s concept. He is the sort of person, who thrives on hard work and never gives up. Moreover, polar bears only live in cold places, but angel hopes to move to California. He loves sunshine, and loves to warm other people’s life. Because he is born in a summer. Just kidding. So if I must use a metaphor to describe him. I will choose angel instead of polar bear. Angle, the beautiful creature, and what his father wants him to become. He is a kind man, and also a capable man. His heart is aflame with love for people. He told me he loves his family, loves his mom, dad, and his younger brother. Actually, his love is broader than what he thinks because he always want to reach out and help those people who need helps. He told me a little story. When he was in high school. He joined a leadership program. In that program, he presided a talent show, and helped raise over $33,000 to a beneficiary in their community that needed help for funds for his chemo therapy treatment. The talent show consisted of a 3 hours event for 2 days. He never think this is a big contribution for the society, but I believe it is.