REVISION TWO PAPERS

Course Description from catalog: Writing a research paper/s. Formulating/answering a research question. Developing an organizational/argument strategy for topic/audience. Supporting research question/argument with scholarly sources （no newspaper, magazine, or from“.com “website, must be scholarly, you can use google scholarly， at least from 3 books and 6 articles）

· Final Paper: This paper will be written in response to the feedback for the paper draft, a substantial rewrite resulting in a tighter, more trimmed paper with more focus, increased depth, and a more complete answer to your research question. 8-10 pages. 

· Formats: All papers should be written with APA format, including (as needed) a cover page and a bibliography; these do NOT count towards the length requirement of the paper.

· All papers must be written in Times New Roman, 12 point font. They must be double spaced (one page means at least one word on the second page), and the space between paragraphs that MSWord automatically puts in MUST be removed (No space between paragraphs).

What you need to do?

· Read the paper carefully, then you must find some issues about this paper. These issues may about grammar, lack of content about any areas, not persuasive enough and so on.

· Feel free to revise it and the paper is 8-10 pages. If you find other supportive reference that will be great.

· Put the comments on the side, using WORD ( insert- comments tool). Then you will be me 2 paper. One is my draft with your comments, another one is your revised final paper.