I need help with this assignment

Revising

by

Stephen Nash

National American University

October 21, 2014

Learn to Earn

Ideas

1. What is the topic of the essay? (1 sentence) Is the topic relevant and interesting? Explain. (3sentences)

2. What is the focus or the thesis of the essay? Is the focus or thesis of the essay clear? Explain. (3sentences)

3. Does the essay contain a variety of specific details? Explain. (3sentences)

Organization

1. Does the first paragraph include the key elements of an effective opening? (Review pages 54-55 for extra support) Explain. (3sentences)

2. Do these paragraphs follow a logical pattern of organization? (1 sentence) If so, which one? (1 sentence) (see pages 46-49 for extra support)

Voice

1. Does the writer sound informed and interested in the topic? Explain. (3sentences)

2. Does the writer sound sincere and honest? Explain. (3sentences)