Please help me with my language log

Reem Boushahri

Mrs. Michelle Metzner

ENG 1100

November 7,2014

Language log #5

1-Original, incorrect sentence: it is considered the highest grossing movie in US Box Office by year 2009.

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2- Original, incorrect sentence: He is the same director of movie Titanic

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3- Original, incorrect sentence: Avatar has been created on 1994.

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4- Original, incorrect sentence: When James Cameron wrote 80 pages as a dealing for the film.

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5- Original, incorrect sentence: it begins filming on 2005 and it has been relisted internationally on 2009.

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