Please help me with my language log
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language_log_.docxReem Boushahri
Mrs. Michelle Metzner
ENG 1100
October 24, 2014
Language log #4
1-Original, incorrect sentence: I will focus about the design, because it is the most effective thing in the ad.
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2- Original, incorrect sentence: I did explain what the text is telling about and why it is important to include it in the ad.
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3- Original, incorrect sentence: it seems that the text is describing emotions of a mother.
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4-Original, incorrect sentence: I felt that this is the way McDonalds they get there costumers, because people they will feel the same emotions and they will come to McDonald’s.
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5-Original, incorrect sentence: When I looked at the picture I felt they are playing together at home I will describe more about it in my ad analysis paper.
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