proofread an English essay

profileYazeed
final_english_2ed_essay.docx

1

Final Draft

Introduction

The reputation that online education has created for itself has extremely fuelled and stimulated its expansion at an exponential rate. The skepticism initially attached to online mode of study has terribly dwindled as more and more evidence emerge of its convenience and effectiveness as compared to face-to-face mode of education. The aim of this paper is to look at some of the benefits online education offers. Online education is offering many necessary things compared to traditional education. It has more flexibility in cost-effective choices and it gives students the opportunity to review class materials at any time they want.

First body paragraph

Even if some schools are offering loan to some students, online education still have better deal. Traditional courses are not offering loan to all students. Moreover, if it does, students would suffer to pay the payments after they graduate. Also, Universities take an interest on each student loan, which would make it harder for them to pay it back some of whose interests are inflated according to the performance of the federal economy. According to the US News (2010), most of Universities Students are receiving Merit Aid. However, if someone needs a scholarship, he/she will to be subjected to strenuous procedures and unnecessary bureaucratic processes that would eventually discourage a good number of applicants and the lucky few have to suffer to get it. Most of the Universities are only offering scholarship for certain amount of people. In scholarship.com (2009), they show how student can get academic or Merit scholarship. This is in an outright violation of right to education for the students who may not be I a position to afford the extent of fee. In academic scholarship you need to get a high grades and it should be in the top five to ten percent of your class. Also, Merit scholarships are almost same as academic scholarship, but also it can be given to a candidate displaying artistic or athletic excellence or sometimes a combination thereof. We can infer that only small percentages of the whole universities who get benefits from scholarship. For majority of all students, online courses are better than traditional schools. Friedman (2012) shows that online courses only cost $100 if it’s not free. However, the tuition of traditional courses at Stanford University is over $40,000 per year. We can tell about the huge different between these two courses. There is no way that a normal student can afford the tuition for traditional Universities. Students are not only suffering from universities tuition. Aspillers (2008) shows that online education may help students to save their money by elimination the costs of transportation, babysitting, parking and other expenses incurred by attending class in traditional sitting. Moreover, students would not have to waste their money to buy a hard copy of the textbook. Online education is not requiring a physical textbook, which might cost triple of the online requirement.

Second Body Paragraph

Many people believe that taking notes during class is more effective than have the notes online for students, but let tell you why this is a wrong idea. The online notes can be always online and there’s no way for students to lose it. Moreover, it’s more accurate because it’s directly from the professor. During class students may miss some of the important information, but online courses everything will be given from the professor online. According to the article; Ten Advantages of face-to-face classes” (2013), students would be able to take notes and they would learn more in face-to-face classes because students are able to see the act of the professor and express it in their notes. What they don’t know is that online courses have more to do with taking notes. They can see the lecture in videos. Moreover, they are able to repeat the videos as many as they want in order to understand the given notes that are already uploaded online from the professor. According to Alto (2012), it shown that online courses are having high quality way of teaching and it has been developed for a long time. It’s time to change. The videos and notes in online classes have been developed in order to be the easiest and most accurate way for students. Students can review their notes and lecture at any time they want. They do not have to be forced to attend lecture at time they don’t feel they want to study. Online notes allow students to click it and go over it whenever they are ready to study.

Conclusion

Online studies and education enables students to manage their time in a constructive manner. Study materials are ever available for reference always. Assignments, homework and projects can be done with information being sourced from updated sources. Also, It has now been made possible for an individual to complete a course while raising a family and be involved in active studies at the same time. Basically online offering the best teaching quality and it is entirely possible from the simplest of certificate to doctorate program.