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Online education is offering many necessary things compared to traditional education. It has more flexibility in cost-effective choices and it gives students the opportunity to review class materials at anytime they want.

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Even if some schools are offering loan to some students, online education still have better deal. Traditional courses are not offering loan to all students. Moreover, if it does, students would suffer to pay the payments after they graduate. Also, Universities take an interest on each student loan, which would make it harder for them to pay it back. According to the US. News (2010), most of Universities Students are receiving Merit Aid. However, if someone needs a scholarship, he/she will suffer to get it. Most of the Universities are only offering scholarship for certain amount of people. In scholarship.com (2009), they show how student can get academic or Merit scholarship. In academic scholarship you need to get exceedingly good grades and, most likely in the top five to ten percent of your class. Also, Merit scholarships are often related to academic performance, but can also be given to a candidate displaying artistic or athletic excellence or sometimes a combination thereof. We can infer that only small percentages of the whole universities who get benefits from scholarship. For majority of all students, online courses are better than traditional schools. Friedman (2012) shows that online courses only cost $100 if it’s not free. However, The tuition of traditional courses at Stanford University is over $40,000 per year. We can tell about the huge different between these two courses. There is no way that a normal student can afford the tuition for traditional Universities. Students are not only suffering from universities tuition. Aspillers (2008) shows that online education may help students to save money by elimination costs of transportation, babysitting, parking and other expenses incurred by attending class in traditional sitting. Moreover, students would not have to waste their money to buy a hard copy of the textbook. Online education is not requiring a physical textbook, which might cost triple of the online requirement.

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May people believe that taking notes during class is more effective than have the notes online for students, but let tell you why this is a wrong idea. The online notes can be always online and there’s no way for students to lose it. Moreover, It’s more accurate because it’s directly from the professor. During class students may miss some of the important information, but online courses everything will be given from the professor online. According to this article.” Ten Advantages of face-to-face classes” (2013), students would be able to take notes and they would learn more in face-to-face classes because students are able to see the act of the professor and express it in their notes. What they don’t know is that online courses have more to do with taking notes. They can see the lecture in videos. Moreover, they are able to repeat the videos as many as they want in order to understand the given notes that are already uploaded online from the professor. Alto (2012) shows that online courses are having high quality way of teaching and it has been developed for a long time. It’s time to change. The videos and notes in online classes have been developed in order to be the easiest and most accurate way for students. Students can review their notes and lecture at anytime they want. They do not have to be forced to attend lecture at time they don’t feel they want to study. Online notes allow students to click it and go over it whenever they are ready to study.

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