English argumentative essay
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outline_2.docxOscar, Ngai Lam Wong
Topic: United State or any government should temporarily suspend migration from Ebola-hit West Africans
Using what you have learned about taking and defending a position and integrating your ideas with ideas from sources, write a persuasive, argumentative paper about yourposition on the topic.
In other words, you are using the knowledge you have acquired through your research to make an argument that you, yourself, support.
Counter arguments for point 3 below
Source1 http://www.cidrap.umn.edu/news-perspective/2014/11/migrations-west-africa-seen-challenge-stopping-ebola
Soucre2 https://forumblog.org/2014/11/why-travel-bans-will-not-stop-the-spread-of-ebola/
Soucre3 http://thinkprogress.org/health/2014/10/16/3580494/travel-ban-wont-solve-ebola/
Point 1 source
http://www.cbc.ca/news/politics/ebola-canada-suspending-visas-for-residents-of-outbreak-countries-1.2820090
Point 2 source
http://www.washingtonpost.com/news/to-your-health/wp/2014/10/01/why-hasnt-the-u-s-closed-its-airports-to-travelers-from-ebola-ravaged-countries/
You can find more sources if you can write on it
I. Introduction - don't need anything except Introduction
a. Hook- Why haven’t governments stopped Ebola carriers to travel around while we can see numerous of them are out of control?
b. Background (Exposition) – Serveral Ebola affected cases confirmed in West Africa. Governments have not set up helpful regulation to avoid affection upon travel bans. The majorities of government has not likely faced these issues directly. For example, the travel ban is seems ineffective.
c. Thesis statement– Therefore, the reasons of suspending migration by government from Ebola-hit West Africans might help to delay the spread of Ebola virus around the world and guarantee the health of citizens. Although it seems a challenge to suspend migration because the affected country might cut off from the rest of the world.
II. Body 1 -
a. Topic sentence– Government should suspend migration from West Africans because it can delay the spread of Ebola virus from one country to other country.
b. Supporting sentences- Governments can stop issuing Visa and propose a complete travel ban to West Africa, it guarantee none of West African people would infect local people. Government should prevent the carriers in West Africa to have any external connect. For example, Canada has already taken the action to suspend issuance of Vise and work application(Helen,2014,para.4) .
c. Transitional Sentence (these are optional)
III. Body 2-
a. Topic sentence (always an opinion) - Government should Government should suspend migration from West Africans because it can absolutely guarantee the health of citizens.
b. Supporting sentences- Although the travel ban has proposed, it shows ineffective to citizens(Phillip,2014,para.9). It is because Ebola can replicates in a stealth pattern in 21 days, which cannot diagnose a traveler with Ebola before they were on board. For example, a Liberian patient who was diagnosed with Ebola in Dallas flew from Belgium(Phillip, 2014,para.2). Locals and hospitals can release the stresses and worries under migrating suspension.
c. Transitional Sentence(these are optional)
IV. Body 3-
a. Topic sentence(counter arguemnt) –
b. Transitional Sentence(these are optional)
V. Conclusion-
a. Restatement of thesis – As government can suspend migration, people can be avoid by the spread of Ebola virus. They can reach to be mentally and physically healthy in order to save the rest of people life in West Africa and other affected countries.
b. Summary of findings/argumentative claims - If government should suspend migration until the situation of Ebola-hit West Africa is under control. Suspending migration is the only and prefect solution beyond travel bans because the travel bans are not good enough. It can prevents more people to get in risk.
c. Closing remark – We need to tackle this problem as fast as possible because Ebola are getting serious and serious. They are very soon to influence you and your family.
