Dennis Wright

Humpage_Kelli_W4A2.odt by Kelli Humpage

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T IME SUBMIT T ED 03- NOV- 2014 11:20PM

SUBMISSION ID 4 7 3088985

WORD COUNT 605

CHARACT ER COUNT 34 20

HUMPAGE_KELLI_W4 A2.ODT (12.24 K)

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GENERAL COMMENTS

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APA Format Yo u need to f o llo w APA f o rmat f o r the essay. Please go to Purdue's OWL (Online Writing Lab) f o r mo re inf o rmatio n o n APA style. Here is the link:

http://o wl.english.purdue.edu/o wl/reso urce/560/18/

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Comment 1 Put this inf o rmatio n o n the f irst page

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Comment 2 T he death penalty....

Del. Delete Additional Comment Do no t use 'yo u' phrasing

Comment 3 T he death penalty

Del. Delete Additional Comment delete "against"

Del. Delete Additional Comment Place 'it' af ter additio nally:

Additio nally, it....

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Awk. Awkward: T he expressio n o r co nstructio n is cumberso me o r dif f icult to read. Co nsider rewriting.

Comment 4 T he death penalty....

Comment 5 Co nf using here. We still have wo rld wars, so end the sentence af ter "past".

Sp. Spelling erro r

Comment 6 and the impo sitio n....

Del. Delete Additional Comment Delete "very"

Comment 7 Do no t repeat this....T hink o f a dif f erent way to begin this sentence

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Comment 8 T he death penalty.....

Yo u need to include "the" at the start o f this sentence.

Comment 9 no co mment

Comment 10 the death penalty

Fused Go to the Purdue OWL web site and review the inf o rmatio n o n run- o n sentences. T his will help yo u to learn ho w to co rrect the run- o n sentences in yo ur writing. Here is the link: http://o wl.english.purdue.edu/o wl/reso urce/598/02/

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APA Format

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Yo u need to f o llo w APA f o rmat f o r the essay. Please go to Purdue's OWL (Online Writing Lab) f o r mo re inf o rmatio n o n APA style. Here is the link:

http://o wl.english.purdue.edu/o wl/reso urce/560/18/

APA Format Yo u need to f o llo w APA f o rmat f o r the essay. Please go to Purdue's OWL (Online Writing Lab) f o r mo re inf o rmatio n o n APA style. Here is the link:

http://o wl.english.purdue.edu/o wl/reso urce/560/18/