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1) And then he got to work in the fourth day.

Prof Comment: You may be using the wrong preposition.

2) I feel that this story is very cliché of Doris Lessing.

Prof comment : you may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.

3)As the speaker proclaims the rights of the blacks.

Prof Comment : you may need to remove this article.

4) I am saddened by the fact that people in the story, which is a sure mirror o the real world, do not seem to honor marriage.

Prof Comment : You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active voice.

5) The pressure at work turns into an ultimatum.

Prof comment : You may be use wrong preposition.