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Instruction for Speech Critique 1

Total Points: 10 points

Due Date: October 7th, 2014

You watch the following video of a short speech of self-introduction titled "When Life Gives You Lemons" and then critique it.

http://www.mhhe.com/socscience/comm/obrien/no_commentary/when_life_gives_you_lemons.html

The critique should be one full page, double space and typewritten. Please email your critique to [email protected] . In the critique, you should

1. Briefly describe the central idea and content of the speech (2 points)

2. Identify two areas that you like. Be specific (2 points).

3. Identify two areas for improvement. Do not simply say “bad” or “weak”.  You should explain how or why the speaker is doing poorly. (2 points)

4. Tell the speaker how to repair the two weaknesses. Make sure your advices are measurable and specific. For example: do not simply say “the speech can be better organized/delivered”. (4 points)

You may use the following items in your critique.

CONTENT	DELIVERY
• central idea made clear? • introduction interesting? • body of speech well-organized? • transitions smooth? • conclusion effective?	• appear at ease? • good eye contact? • speaking rate okay? • voice clear and loud enough? • avoided uh, um, okay? • gestures adequate? • posture good?