I need help writing a story bible. Details in the descriptions.

Makenzie Desouza is a 17 year old ward of the state. Anticipating her 18th birthday so she can escape the foster abuse that she has endure since she witness the murder of her wealthy drug dealing father known to the streets as H2 and her sweet innocent mother Hailey. At the age of 6 she became property of the system and has been to several different foster homes. She has been physically and sexually abused throughout her stay and has since developed a cold heart and a massive hatred for men.

What are the defining characteristics of your character’s physical appearance?

Makenzie grew up in the wealthy park of Grosse Pointe Park, MI. With H2 having one of Columbus biggest connect, he was the big distribution Detroit has ever seen. Makenzie was shelter from that world until the day the Columbus came in the middle of the night ambushing their secure home, beheading her father and raping and slicing her mothers throat, as she watched from the built in safe room cameras. Makenzie is 130lbs, dark smooth chocolate complexion, full lips, puppy dog eyes and think eye lashes that makes her eyes appear to be slanted. As she is developing into a woman she has full size C cup breast, a slim toned waist and her mother’s shapely hips and thighs. Now that she is almost legally a woman, Makenzie is beginning to notice how powerful her appearance is and she plans to use it for revenge.

What apparel and ornamentation (make up, tattoos, jewelry, hair style, etc.) does the character have?

Makenzie tries to be as fashionable as her allowance allows her to be. Since beginning high school she developed a thing for make up. She would steal it from her local CVS and Walgreens and apply it until she got it right. Making herself even more appealing and mature-looking. She likes her hair touching her back. She even adds extensions to achieve the look she feels make her look sexier. Makenzie has a complexion disorder. She notice that girls with lighter skins gets more attention and darker girls are not as attractive. She uses her make up to conceal her complexion. Makenzie’s royalties were taken away from her when her parents were murdered, but when the social worker came she was wearing the diamond earrings, necklace and ring her father has custom made for her 6th birthday. She never took it off. When the ring had gotten to small she attached it to her necklace and she cherish them. It’s the only thing she has from her past and she has been protecting it for 11 years.

Website:

Ethoma. (2010, Nov 23). Foster Care Remains a Sexual Abuse Laboratory Experiment. Retrieved from: http://liftingtheveil.blog.com/2010/11/23/foster-care-remains-a-sexual-abuse-laboratory-experiment/

Website:

Edward Kruk (2012). The Vital Importance of Paternal Presence in Children’s Lives. Obtained from http://www.psychologytoday.com/blog/co-parenting-after-divorce/201205/father-absence-father-deficit-father-hunger

.com/news/five-ways-to-change-your-personality/

Book Source:

Yeakey, C. C. (2012). Living on the boundaries: Urban marginality in national and international contexts. Bingley, U.K: Emerald.