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Yazeed Alsadhan

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Everyone should have the chance to be well educated in high quality schools even If they are not wealthy enough. To achieve this, schools must decrease the amount of tuitions and make an option which is to pay the school fees in long-term payments.

I believe that how wealthy the person is has a relation of how soon they will graduate. According to Richard D. Kahlenberg in his article “ The Purpose of Higher Education”, the percentage of people who graduate by the age 24 from high-income families are ten times more than people from low-income family. Clearly we can see that poor people are suffering in education more than others. Moreover, the wealth of the person has a relation of what grade they will get. While they are too many schools in the words, some private schools are not strict as others, which is the one’s has high tuition. In Saudi Arabia we have two sectors of schools, one is private and other is public. The public school is free so they are really strict with their students. However, private schools are less strict than public schools. It’s really hard to get 80% out of 100% in public schools. On the other hand, in private schools no one gets less than 90%. Also, when they both need to get a job. The one in a private school is preferred than the one in public schools. Everyone thinks they are not smart as the one who studied in a private school. In fact, this is a wrong idea. It’s just because the two schools are having different qualifications. This is not fair. I would say that all schools should have high quality teaching methods and do not make it based on how wealthy the students are.

All schools should have the same teaching qualifications. Students who are having low-income should get the chance to learn as those who are having high-income. No one is better than other. All students should have the same teaching techniques in order to increase the amount of educated people. According to Ken Robinson in his speech “ Bring on The Learning Revolution”, most of students think they are not having any talent. Robison believe that most of students who think they are not talented are actually talented, but schools should create the circumnutates to help them find their talents. In these days it’s hard to find this kind of schools and if you find one the tuition would be high. Low-income people are forced to enroll in poor quality schools while there are not having any other choice. Also, public schools are not concern about their students as private schools do because the incomes of their schools are not depending on their students. However, Private schools are trying to make the education easier and fun in order to get more students to raise their income. All schools should be the same and not dividing it into two, one for those who are having high-income and one for those who are having low-income. All students should have the same way of teaching. As the same time, they should decrease tuition for those who are not able to pay the tuition and also give them an option to make the payments in a long term.

Schools and governments should help students to focus in their schools instead of let them thinking about how they would pay their upcoming semesters fees. All schools should decrease their fees for those who are having low-income. All students who are having a prove such as official documents that shows they are having low-income should get lower tuition. Also, schools should motivate them by giving scholarships for those who are getting high grades. Many students are going to study harder and spend more time in their assignments in order to get the scholarship. Thus, students would understand more and get benefits at the same time. Students should have the opportunity to pay the school fees in long-term payments, which to pay small amount of money every month or every certain period of time.