Revision of Expository Essay

Content and Development – 45 Points

Points Earned – 45/45

Additional Comments:

The revision is substantive and effective. To note:

0. Major revisions (i.e., noticeable changes in content and organization) are evident.

0. The revision remains in line with its assigned rhetorical mode.

0. The revision contains all the elements of a successful essay: a precise, pertinent, and persuasive thesis; effective support for that thesis; and descriptive language where and when appropriate.

0. Inter- and intra-paragraph content is effectively organized (spatially, temporally, logically, or by order of importance) and makes use of topic sentences and appropriate transitional expressions.

0. The introduction and conclusion are engaging, cohesive, and appropriate to their position in the revision.

The revision has been submitted to Turnitin. A paragraph of self-reflection and the original essay accompany the revision.

Readability and Style – 10 Points

Points Earned – 10/10

The tone is appropriate to the content and assignment.

Sentences are complete, clear, and concise.

Sentences are well-constructed, with consistently strong, varied syntax.

Sentence transitions are present and maintain the flow of thought.

Mechanics – 10 Points

Points Earned – 10/10

Rules of grammar, usage, and punctuation are followed.

Mechanics are accurate.

Spelling is correct.

Total – 65 Points

Points Earned – 65/65

Overall Comments: