galbargan2122013comparisonbetweenlivinginapartmentsandhouses.docx

I have a communication in business class and I will have speech soon, so there is my essay and I need you to outline it, add third step to it (it can be simple words), but the important thing that you must make the topic related to business otherwise I will not take it..

On the second attachment there is just an example how to outline my topic.

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The Comparison between Living in Apartments and Houses

In major commercial cities there are two options available for a type of accommodation, houses and apartments. Some people prefer to live in apartments instead of living in houses and the other people do not. However, I believe living in an apartment is the best choice for being more comfortable because of the protection, Being part of a big family, and the housework as opposed to living in a house which has to consider securing their home safely as well as taking where one more time to clean the house.

In big business cities, apartments provide a much more comfortable and safe place to than live other lodging. In cities like these, people are always going out for either work or study. The advantages of an apartment include the fact that there is not only a locked gate around the community but also on the individual apartments, and there is a sense of being a part of a big family in a compound. Usually, a guard sits at the main gate or safe automatic gate, so children can play in the compound with their neighborhood friends. In addition, because apartments are small, there are not many daily cleaning tasks-this is a benefits for housewives. Furthermore, the key advantage is that apartments are relatively safe to leave when going on vacation or a long trip because of their added security.

On the other hand, people who live in houses have their own attractions to living in a house. First, garden lovers usually prefer houses, so they can have their own garden. It is also easy to keep pets around the yard, especially dogs because they can take care of themselves. It can only be possible in houses where people have their own yard. In addition, people are sometimes much more concerned about their privacy, but living in apartments can be very difficult for them. This may be the case for someone who is not able to deal with other people, for instance next-door neighbors, and then a house can be the best choice for such people. At the same time, houses cannot be the perfect choice for people who have a low income, so maintaining a big house and running it properly can be a problem. Finally, cleaning a house is difficult, so people need more time to do its work such as cleaning bedrooms and the yard.

In conclusion, both options can be either right or wrong, depending on the personal consideration. From my point of view, apartments seem to be a gift introducing the modern way of living that is not common in my hometown.