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I like my name very much, because it is meaningful. My name translated to English is fifty-six, which means that my father got me at fifty-six. It also has very meaningful meaning and unique among Japanese Name, as well the name usually to record or remind something. I have a very big family of 7. I have 5 siblings that is rarely to find in China from what I heard. Oh, I forgot to tell you the most successful thing in my life, which is about my wife. Before get marry, she was the famous superstar. After getting married with me, she gave up her job and become a housewife for me, in order to take care of family and our children.

All of my families are Buddhist. As a part of Buddhists, we believe that Karma is real. If you do good thing, good thing will return back to you. Same situation if you commit bad things. Meanwhile, I also believed that people would go to heaven after they died. Death is not an end of life, and it is also another new start of the life.

  Today is a special day for our daughter, because she is 20 years and today is also Coming-of-Age Day. It is January 11th, but it is always changed the date every year. Generally, the Coming-of-Age Day is the second Monday on January every year. Guess what it is? It is one of my favorite festivals, because I will see lots of pretty girls who are so hot and sexy. I knew my daughter did not fall in sleep last night, because she needs to prepare lots of things, such as doing the makeup, making her hair, and dress her Kimono. When I wake up, I feel a little bit depressed, because my daughter will be a formal adult today. She will also be end with the protection from us, and she will also be independent and responsible to her new life. After dress up, I attend to，めいじじんぐう， the famous shrine, which is also the center of city with my family to celebrate this day with my daughter. The reason is government will host special coming-of-age ceremonies, and give the certification to them.

During the ceremony, the elder will put the special crown on people’s head, which is also the symbol of turning to a adult. Then the elder will also give a cup of special alcohol to them, in order to prove they are adult now. After the People who are turning to adult will also to make the wishes for their futures. Look, this is my daughter, and she is so beautiful today. After we finish, we are going to have dinner, unlucky, I have to do my work after dinner, because tomorrow I will meet an important customer. In fact, I am so busy everyday; I also usually to spend extra time on my job, because I have to earn significant money for my big family which are 3 children and my wife.

We have a family gathering at the end of the day. We went to eat favorite dishes such as Sukiyaki, Tempura, Sushi, Sashimi, Kaiseki (Made by fish, vegetable, and seaweed), Yakitoui, and Tonkatsu (Traditional fried pork) and end up with Undo noodle. All in all, we like to eat seafood very much, as well we like to eat foods with less oily. This is what I did for a day. I’m so filled with happiness and unforgettable moments.

Now, it is the time for me to do my work. As well, I usually did my work in the night. I probably will finish my work around 1 am, and my wife and children fallen in sleep already. Tomorrow, I also need to wake up at 6:30 am and catch the subway. It is my busy life, but I like it.