All key elements of the assignment are covered in a substantive way. To note:
· The essay contains a precise, pertinent, and persuasive thesis
· The essay makes effective use of descriptive language
· Inter- and intra-paragraph content is effectively organized (spatially, temporally, logically, or by order of importance) and makes use of topic sentences and appropriate transitional expressions
· The introduction and conclusion are engaging, cohesive, and appropriate to their position in the essay