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Research proposal

NAME: How team sports are beneficial to both parents and their children

THESIS: Sports are known to provide the best forums for interactions and also help individuals to built self images, this means that parents and children would benefit from such because sports promotes the interactions between them.

BACKGROUND: Parents have the ability to influences the love for sport in their children. They should be supportive also in ensuring that their children’s hobbies and talent in sport is created.

OBJECTIVE: To assess the level in which parents should come in aid of choosing a sport for their children

SUPPORTING POINTS: 1. MORAL SUPPORT         a: Analysis of to what extent should parents be permitted to allow their children choose a sport of their choice.         b: Assessment of the impact of parental support to a child’s love for a sport         c: Analyzing results of performance in children who were supported by their parents and those who were not 2. PARENT’S VIEW ON THE SPORT         a: Analyze what makes a parent not allow their child to choose a sport of their own.

        b: What is the experience of the parent when it comes to such issues? Were they supported?         c: imperative statistics on performance of parents who were supported and those who were not supported to choose a sport of their own. 3. CHILDREN’S PERSPECTIVE ON WHO SHOULD CHOOSE A SPORT FOR THEM         a: Analyze opinions from children who were supported by their parents to choose a sport of their choice.         b: Analyze opinions from children who were not supported by their parents and have made it well.         c: Analyze opinions from children who were supported by their parents and have not made well in the field of team sport

COUNTER-ARGUMENTS: 1. Parents are beneficial in offering moral support to their children in making choice for team sport s they prefer. 2. Children have the ability to make their own choices following their talent and passion for the sport 3. A better performing child in team sport owes it to the support of their parents.

RESPONSE TO COUNTER-ARGUMENTS: 1. In as much as parents are able to offer moral support, they are not the only ones, in that children can be encouraged by their peers and especially their coach. 2. A child can make his/her own choice but parents being grownups have the potential to instill better decisions to their children’s choice and preferences. 3. Not all better performing children owes their success to their parents entirely, other people involve the team members, peers and the coach.

IMPLICATIONS:

Parents are well versed with knowledge on certain team sports and it is crucial that they influence their children’s knowledge on the game so that they make better decisions on choosing the sport.

Fade-back: 1.You did not post a proper thesis statement on the board in order to receive feedback. The thesis statement is the foundation for your paper and as a result, your proposal suffers. You must be certain that your TS is a single, declarative statement that isn't too broad (like the word "beneficial").

There are numerous errors - while some are content-related, there are many formatting issues that may have been voided if you took the time to ascertain that your proposal meets the criteria (and comparing it to the examples included in the module):

(1) Your name is to included in the name section.

(2) The thesis statement using "beneficial" is too broad.

(3) The thesis section is incorrect and is a run-on.

(4) The background section doesn't offer an in-depth explanation that serves as an overview to your argument and position.

(5) The objective section is too short.

(6) Many sentences are grammatically incorrect and they lack punctuation.

(7) The counter arguments section is incorrect; therefore causing your responses to those to be ambiguous. The counter arguments is your opposition and the response you must include should address each counter argument.

(8) The implications section is incorrect and just one, long run-on sentence.

(9) No tentative bibliography.

2. I do not really understand your thesis statement. Also you should tighten it up it seems like your topic is a run on. Also you should apply more information about your topic. You have an interesting topic that you can get a lot of information and I feel that once you do your research you will be able to give more details about your topic.