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Comment on the thesis statements of 5 (five) classmates using the following guidelines to give feedback:

1-Ali Melliti thesis statement on Atheism

since the Ancient Greece era, Atheist were rejected by the larger society. In fact, Atheism was a pejorative term to design those who refuse to believe in the existence of God(s). However, today this minority group has grown over the world and decided to express their thoughts openly. rather than that, the new atheism in the 21 century have decided to fight against religions by criticizing it and encounter it with rational arguments.

2- Ebtehal

                    The Future (or Lack Thereof?) of the Girl Scouts of America

Generally speaking, the Girl Scouts is considered to be a positive activity for a girl to be involved in; it helps with character development through things like activities, camps, and seminars, not to mention the number of female role models girls chance to encounter. However, in spite of all the things the Girl Scouts has to offer, they are facing many challenges; notably in the form of updating their image and rebranding themselves as a relevant organization that still has a place in the life of girls today. 

3-Myungjin Thesis Statement

Ravers which is a group made in 1960-1970 love party, so they usually have party every friday to sunday, some hard ravers start party thursday, and the party is done on sunday. People who don't know well about ravers think they always play, so they have bad effect on society and neighbors, but they have their rules and consider other people very carefully, so the belief that ravers are bad for society is untrue even they have good effects..

4- subculture thesis statement of hojin

around us or in our community or all over the world, we have a bunch of major and minor cultures. in fect, some of these culture can be accepted for us but some of them do not even the cultures are major culture for a country because we have experienced different cultures or been used to each original cultures. however, i think some of these cultures are interesting than i did not know them before. we might hear or see several major cultures for many countries from books, internet, TV, or radio. so through the ENGL 130E class, I am going to research and go over about the red hat association which has rule to wear a red hat. especially, what is the purpose of this group or how has this group done for their members? actually this group works for upgrading life quility of their members who are only women and tries to make a business for managing this group and paying for lots of programs for their members.